Comments | reimars: Naruto - Sword & Shield, plunder (SasuSaku)

reimars

Naruto - Sword & Shield, plunder (SasuSaku)

May 12, 2006 14:44

Sakura and Sasuke, creating a relationship after the wreckage of choices has settled.
Unofficially for 30_kisses, the first of several snapshots.

( I'll be your gracious angel )

sakura, 30 kisses, sasusaku, sasuke

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reimars May 12 2006, 23:46:32 UTC

Well, considering genius-boy Itachi's going blind at twenty and Obito never really was all that bright. . . .

whytecrow May 13 2006, 00:45:58 UTC

Sasuke must really like/love Sakura if he's allowing her to see his clan's scrolls- Though the hesitation counts for something (Kept him in character anyway).

The last paragraph was cute.

Leave it to Sasuke to be considerate when Naruto's feelings are concerned; I'm just going to pretend there is an impending threesome XD *can't accept Sasuke and Sakura together without Naruto.*

reimars May 13 2006, 04:11:38 UTC

Heh, thank you.

*grin* With the way my ideas for this one played out, it's not going to be too hard to pretend it's a NaruSasuSaku, just with the bits with Naruto all happening off-screen. If Sasuke was this isolated from the village in general, then it would only make Naruto an even bigger part of both his and Sakura's life--there's no way not to have him there.

*loves Reimars* monique_27 May 14 2006, 09:01:28 UTC

*sigh*...I love you. And you're writing. I imagine you are _so_ tired of hearing it, especially from me, but I can't help it ( ... )

Re: *loves Reimars* reimars May 15 2006, 04:04:02 UTC

Get tired of praise, psh. *grin*

No, no, don't worry or anything--you've never seemed pressuring to me, just like you were really enjoying what you're reading, which is a great compliment.

*grin* Thanks! And, you too.

kireiko May 18 2006, 14:30:42 UTC

*sigh* I envy you, I really do... your talent, your writing - actually, I'm just really glad that I can read more wonderful work from you. This little snapshot piece was great. I love how you portrayed Sasuke's characterization, and how the awkwardness/not so awkwardness interaction between Sakura and Sasuke play out. And I love how you included Kakashi in the piece as well, and how you incorporated a 'sort of falling out' thing with him and Sasuke makes me love it even more... (please excuse the fangirlyness of my praises, I'm really more coherent than this... ^____^;;)

That last little paragraph = love (with me squeeing on the inside ;) )

Can't wait to read more! There's more right? .__.??

Awesome work like always!!

~kir

reimars May 18 2006, 20:16:14 UTC

*grin* Wow, thank you very much.

Yep, there's more, though this was about the only one that really involved Kakashi--most of them have Naruto instead. I just need to stop being lazy and write them. ¬_¬

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rayemars May 27 2006, 07:28:34 UTC

Only in the background?

I feel like I took the easy way out a little by just painting the whole village with a general reaction, because it doesn't take into account individuals, but I'm tired of writing about his return politically and it's not supposed to be the point, so. I was lazy. (Glad it didn't seem to come across too much like that. *grin*)