FORBIDDEN LOVE (reitaxruki)- chp 1

Mar 28, 2010 02:19

Title: Forbidden Love
Author: reiloveskitkat
Chapter: 1/??
Genre: AU
Pairing: ReitaxRuki, ReitaxUruha
Ratings: PG-15 (I guess..)
Warnings: Bad english, no-beta (and I’m looking for one.. =__=a)
Disclaimer: I have none of them.. *cries*
Summary: Ruki moved to his brother’s apartment where he live with his lover..
Notes: My own first (hope) multi-chapters fic.. hope you ( Read more... )

multi-chaptered, fanfic, reitaxruki

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aoispet March 27 2010, 21:07:32 UTC
mm... Interesting start! Let's see how Ruki will handle this *giggle*(suggestion: torment Ruki xD *gets shot*)

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 02:06:38 UTC
XD thank you, hun!! *hug*
haahahahaaha... nice suggestion... >D

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rumieru March 27 2010, 21:10:23 UTC
Woah! First!>_< So.. It seems interesting with lots of drama. Am I right? O.O I like it ^-^

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rumieru March 27 2010, 21:11:11 UTC
I have to correct myself: second :D

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 02:09:57 UTC
it's surprise, hun...
thank you for commenting!! XD
<3

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heartsyuu March 27 2010, 23:49:59 UTC
Aiyaaaaaah~ I love ReitaxRuki! xD
Ruki is too cute. Oh my god. xD I hope he doesn't get his ass kicked by Uruha if he ever finds out that he likes Reita.
I suggest you make this a really sad story with a happy ending :D I likes angst.
I HOPE HIM, REITA AND URUHA HAVE A THREESOME AT THE END*gets shot*
I would beta for you, but my grammar isn't all that good. xD Sorryyy~

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 02:11:50 UTC
hahahaha... I even dont know how this would continue... ^__^a

XD it's okay!! thank youuuu~

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chinese_indo March 28 2010, 00:39:34 UTC
so cute~ this seems interesting ;) please continue, can't wait or the next chapter!

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 02:13:45 UTC
sure... ~
XD
thank you for commenting...<3
waaah, dari Indonesia juga yaaa?? XD

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chinese_indo March 28 2010, 02:33:34 UTC
XD yay another indonesian fans!! there's so much gaze fans in indonesia :D

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 03:40:50 UTC
yes!! because they're lovely.... XDDDDDD

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gabriel_me March 28 2010, 02:01:48 UTC
Aaaaaaa, mau lanjutannaaaaaaa!!! X3
Kaya na bakal seru nih! Mau lagi~ ^3^

Anoo, nyari english-beta? Hmm, aku ngga master2 amat si, tp mungkin aku bisa bantu dikit~ Ahaha. XDDD Ada kriteria tah?

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 02:15:45 UTC
^^b
sabar yaaaaaa~ ngumpulin ide2 yang bececer dulu... XD

ho oh niih. abis gak puas banget sama b.ing aku.. =____=
boleh2.. XD kriterianyaaaaa... gak ada... cuma bisa bantuin grammar n other english stuffs sudah sangat membantu... ^___^b

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gabriel_me March 28 2010, 02:32:00 UTC
Hohoo, I'll do my best! X3 Jd saiya ditrima kah? XDD

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reiloveskitkat March 28 2010, 03:28:14 UTC
wah??? mau bantuin???? >o<
boleh sekali!!!! *jingkrak2*
selamat anda diterima!! *jabat tangan*

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