Deadly Commoners' Game (ch4)--Ouran/Jumanji crossover

[reidluver]

Title: Deadly Commoners' GameAuthor: Reidluver
Fandom: Ouran High School Host Club, Jumanji
Pairing/Characters: All Host Club members
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Intense danger and emotional scenes

Summary: In an effort to understand more of a commoner's lifestyle, Tamaki invites the Host Club members to the school to play an old board game that he found.

Comments

[gutterkitty]

"Besides," Kaoru added with a smile, "what would daddy say if we let mommy bleed to death?" ROFLMAO! Love it!!!

You write the twins so well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

There are, however, some missing words here and there. You might consider just taking a quick glance through. They're nothing serious though.

[reidluver]

XD Definitely one of my favorite parts as well. So much fun to write. And thank you! Glad I got the twins down and I like your appropriate icon. XD

Oh really? Yikes! Thanks for the heads-up! I'll go fix it now! *reads*

[demoerin]

I like how this is making the Host Club more human to each other, like how they suddenly realise that even Kyouya and Honey are only a little older than them, and they can easily be hurt. Other things I liked: how easily they tamed the monkeys (d'aww), the twins finding it therepeutic to toss water balloons around (they WOULD), and Haruhi realising that she has the whole Host Club on her side. ♥

*runs for next chapter*

[reidluver]

Thanks! :) I feel like situations like this where you have to fight for your life and you have to face your own morality can have interesting affects on people and I really wanted to explore that with the Ouran cast. We always see them in such a silly, somewhat satirical atmosphere that I just wanted to play with them.

Heh--that particular bit with Haruhi was definitely my favorite to write.