It's a Mafia Life (15) END--KHR Fanfic

Jan 23, 2011 12:30

Title: It's a Mafia Life
Author: Reidluver
Pairing/Characters: Um...pretty much all of them (characters I mean)
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Spoilers for Future Arc, Varia Language, Long chapter is LONG

A/N: I am not making any points for pairings-just family fluff but of course you may see it any way you like.

Summary: As ( Read more... )

fanfiction, reborn, tsuna, yamamoto, katekyo hitman reborn!, vongola family, tyl!selves, gokudera hayato

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bloodtaki2 January 24 2011, 01:57:45 UTC
Surprisingly enough, I laughed my ass out the most at the part where Shoichi and Spanner making geeky jokes. I don't know why, but it just cracked me up. XD

Anyway, good job! That was one good happy ending. Usually, I don't like too cheesy, but this way pretty funny. And Yamamoto and Gokudera by Tsuna's side made me "awwww!".

Hum, nevermind... >__>

XD

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reidluver January 24 2011, 05:14:43 UTC
XD That's okay--it would be a funny sight, especially to see Spanner laughing like crazy. He's always so mellow I would like to see him in that situation.

Awww, why thank you! I figure the Vongola Family would have their cheesy moments that are then quickly overshadowed by the sheer hilarity of their lives.

Heehee! Oh gosh I love those three together. I try not to be biased when I write chapters that feature everyone in the family, but I always end up focusing on those three. ^^; Oh well. They're awesome so it doesn't matter. Thank you so much again!

And have I mentioned how cute and adorable your icon is? MAKES ME WANT TO HUG YAMAMOTO TO DEATH!! (What's going on with him Amano?!?! Seriously--it's killing me)

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bloodtaki2 January 24 2011, 12:42:01 UTC
Isn't he? What a cute pie that Yamacchin. XD

I'm dying to find the whole picture. -___-
He's just so adorable!

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reidluver January 25 2011, 16:35:51 UTC
Best of luck finding it! If I ever come across it I'll let you know.

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waterbaby12us January 24 2011, 04:49:37 UTC
OH MY GOD! That was the best christmas EVER!!!! I like how you end it, since the previous chapters has been so mellow and depressing, I really like the happy atmosphere here, and watching Tsuna go around kissing and hugging everyone (honestly, the part with Hibari and Xanxus just crack me up XDDDDDDDDDD). You really wrote the scene really nicely, and showed how Tsuna love every of his Family, and how they also adore him in their own way ^^ Very sweet ending!

p.s And Hibari dancing just made me roll on the floor laughing XD

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reidluver January 24 2011, 05:19:08 UTC
Awww, why thank you! :D I'm so, so happy you enjoyed the ending! I was fretting over it for the longest time, I have to admit. I'm kind of sad that I wasn't able to post it on Christmas day, but such is life.

Teehee--oh gosh I had so much fun writing Hibari and Xanxus's reactions!! Why thank you--I'm so happy to know I was able to convey their love and friendship. That's the thing that really attracts me to KHR and I wanted to honor it in my own way.

Bwahahaha! Oh man would I love to see Hibari drunk and dancing and singing the Namimori anthem. XD

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rade_zahitya January 24 2011, 06:40:54 UTC
well hello again! xD
I can't say much because all the previous comments have voiced what I have to say but...
I especially love the scene with reborn at the end! :)

BRAVO!!! You have completed a masterpiece! (is it? If not, then a pseudo-masterpiece then lol)
It's kinda sad that I won't rush to my computer each morning to read your fic (even though I might be late for college) but...
Like you said in your work above, I wouldn't take it any other way! ^^

*throws KHR shaped cookies to you*
Let's celebrate 2011 Christmas a 'little' bit early, shall we?

*kisses everyone*

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rade_zahitya January 24 2011, 06:43:00 UTC
ah...almost forgot.
I also adore TsunaxGokuxYama's relationship, they are just the cutest thing ever! :)

I hope you will make more fic for them, and for the whole family as well! ;D

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reidluver January 24 2011, 06:52:58 UTC
Whoa! I responded to the first one and then this suddenly appeared. XD

I KNOW!! THAT'S MY FAVORITE THING ABOUT KHR I THINK!!

-ahem- Sorry. XD But yeah, I definitely will write more about those three. They're so awesome! As well as the rest of the Family, but probably not for a little while. ^^; This last chapter really took it out of me.

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reidluver January 24 2011, 06:51:13 UTC
XD Thanks! I really liked writing that. Didn't plan on it from the beginning...it sorta just happened, but I'm so grateful it did! Lately my stories have ended with Reborn getting the best of Tsuna, so I figured it was high time things were switched around.

Awww, thank you so much! <3 Oh I have totally done that before--be late to a class because I was reading a fic. ^^; Oh well.

*gobbles up cookies* Fank 'ou! Yeah! Christmas in January! XD *kisses* (secretlywishesshecouldkissallthekhrcharacters)

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storm_obsession January 24 2011, 13:25:42 UTC
My favourite chapter, after all that doom and gloom. X(
Tsuna..kissing everyone. AHAHAHAHA. :D

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reidluver January 24 2011, 15:10:13 UTC
Thanks! :) Glad you liked it.

Teehee--Tsuna wuvs them! <3

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hypnos28 January 29 2011, 16:17:09 UTC
Wow, this is such an awesome story!
I read the entire thing in one go and this chapter was worth waiting for!
I loved the happiness in this chapter as it made up for all the pain in the previous chapters. I couldn't stop myself from reading this. It was hilarious and sweet.
I'm definitely reading more of your works! :D

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reidluver January 29 2011, 18:57:27 UTC
Awww! -blush- Thank you so much! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story and that the happiness made up for the angst. XD I just felt so awful okay, maybe not TOO awful putting them all through that pain and hardships but I figured the craziness and fluffiness at the end would more than make up for it. XD

*hugs* Aww, thanks! I'm so pleased you're liking it. (Oh, and if you want funny fluff then I would suggest this story--it's kind of hidden from all my IML chapters)

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