I brought you here to heal you (Jack, Ianto; PG), 2/2

Jul 25, 2008 03:03

Title: I brought you here to heal you (2/2)
Author: etharei
Rating: PG
Timeline: after "Greeks Giving Gifts" (107)
Spoilers: "Cyberwoman" (104), "Countrycide" (106), "Greeks Giving Gifts" (107)
Summary: He hadn’t planned on leaving anything, but there’s a man selling flowers down the street. It suits his mood, to leave such transient tokens for all the ( Read more... )

challenge: horizons sing, rating: pg, tw:jack/ianto, fanfiction: torchwood

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lunachickk July 24 2008, 19:50:24 UTC
I feel much better now. :D

That was lovely. I loved how you went back and forth in time. You are so good at this!

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etharei September 1 2008, 22:32:11 UTC
THANK YOU, LUNIE! YOU ARE MY HERO ♥

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rosy5000 July 24 2008, 20:56:09 UTC
I love the nurse's POV on Jack's feelings. I'm sure at this point, Ianto would be happy to keep ignoring Jack's feelings, but to have it pointed out by a stanger, he's forced to face it. The roses don't hurt either. ;)

Now, I think I'm just going to go turn into a pile of happy goo. :D

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etharei September 1 2008, 22:34:09 UTC
Thank you, I worried that the chattering nurse would be too much, but people do talk a lot to random handsome strangers sometimes :D And yeah, and outsider's POV can be quite revealing.

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xxxiluviantoxxx July 24 2008, 22:04:42 UTC
luv da nurse
luv da whole fing
r u going to countinue this? Plez?
thanks :-)

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etharei September 1 2008, 22:36:38 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm very glad that you enjoyed my writing!

I think this particular fic is complete, as I do like leaving things ambiguous and open-ended, but I'm very gratified that you want more. Please feel free to look at my other fics *grins sheepishly*

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plotbunniesinc July 24 2008, 22:08:13 UTC
Oh...
Oh, please don't tell me you're going to leave that there!
*sniffs*
It's lovely.

(Although my internal Archaeologist, left over from my degree, feels the need to point out that it's Londinium, and still technically there...)

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etharei September 1 2008, 22:40:01 UTC
I'm afraid this is where this particular fic ends, because I do like to leave things ambiguous and open-ended. Thank you so much for your kind words and interest ♥

(ARGH, really? To be honest, I scrounged up the name from my memory of a tour around London, and goodness knows I have no grasp of Latin. Thank you, I shall correct it.)

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ice_feather July 24 2008, 22:12:52 UTC
A little bittersweet, but lovely. :)

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etharei September 1 2008, 22:40:44 UTC
Thank you very much!

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