fish have no word for water (Jack/Ianto, PG)

Jul 05, 2008 04:25

Title: Fish have no word for water
Author: etharei
Rating: PG
Timeline: directly after "Greeks Giving Gifts" (107)
Spoilers: "Cyberwoman" (104), "Greeks Giving Gifts" (107)
Summary: Ianto develops a new pastime.
Author's Notes: Title taken from a quote in the book Small Gods by Terry Pratchett (a Discworld novel).
Disclaimer: Torchwood and all the ( Read more... )

challenge: horizons sing, rating: pg, tw:jack/ianto, fanfiction: torchwood

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lonerstarlight July 5 2008, 10:41:30 UTC
-ish dead-

oh my you've killed us all...this does not bode well

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etharei July 11 2008, 15:09:43 UTC
*giggles and gives Jack's kiss of life*

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :D

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beathen July 5 2008, 16:06:57 UTC
YAY!!! I love when Ianto can't keep his hands off Jack! I also like your characterization of Ianto needing to get out into the public. And of course Jack would invade that space just a little, but it's so worth it!

GREAT JOB!!!

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etharei July 11 2008, 15:11:41 UTC
I love exploring the dynamics between Jack and Ianto after Cyberwoman, as there's so much potential there for character development and introspection. I imagine it as a bit of push-and-pull, and both Ianto and Jack kind of at a loss about what to do with the other.

Jack is asking what this personal space thing is that everyone's talking about XD

Thank you so much ♥

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etharei July 11 2008, 15:12:01 UTC
Oh, thank you very much!

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cageyklio July 16 2008, 00:29:42 UTC
This is really quite lovely. I like Ianto as a walker and observer; I love the way you bring Ianto together with Jack; the dialogue is spot on. Thanks for sharing!

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etharei July 22 2008, 13:36:40 UTC
Thank you very much! (And sorry for the late reply, life's been a bit hectic of late.) I'm glad that you enjoyed it, especially the dialogue as I tend to find that the trickiest part.

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merucha July 16 2008, 01:27:26 UTC
Excellent!

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etharei July 22 2008, 13:37:45 UTC
Thank you!

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