There's so much I want to say about this - how much I love that you write from John's point of view, how easily this fits into every one of the five stories, how you use phrases like "how Sam’s leaning towards Dean just as much as Dean’s leaning towards Sam" - whoa. I'm just kind of - wow.
An eternity passes as you watch your sons look at each other, hold a long, silent conversation with each other. The feeling that there’s more to this than you’re seeing, it’s getting stronger with every quiet second, so you’re wracking your brain trying to think of what it could be, trying to remember what Dean said to you back in Eldon, but then Dean's talking and you have to ask him to repeat himself, eyes catching the way the tips of Dean’s fingers brush the tips of Sam’s, how Sam’s leaning towards Dean just as much as Dean’s leaning towards Sam, seeing that they’re both conscious of each other in a way they never were before.
OMG, that right there is sheer brilliance. I need to still leave FB on the other stories but I'm still processing everything. So, so, good.
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This is incredible, thank you. ♥
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(I hope your sister's had a wonderful birthday. *Hugs*)
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OMG, that right there is sheer brilliance. I need to still leave FB on the other stories but I'm still processing everything. So, so, good.
Thanks for this.
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*Cuddles*
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At last! And so fitting, of course, for all of these stories. So fitting with John's POV. Oh, we've waited a long time for this scene.
Very satisfying ending :)=
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