Comments | rehuxley: Soaking

rehuxley

Soaking

Sep 20, 2006 20:45

She said she was
a flower.

Twirling with head
held back,

She closed here eyes
and waited

for the tears of God
to fall

and soak her frail form
in Love.

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Comments 3

amaliadubois September 21 2006, 13:22:06 UTC

wow.

anima September 22 2006, 07:10:38 UTC

The best poem I have read in such a long time!

rehuxley September 22 2006, 13:31:24 UTC

Thank you both for the pleasant feedback. It was one of those spontaneous poetic moments. :)