First of all, Bunny and Shrödinger are awesome. I love the way you wrote them. I also love the fact that you gave Ripp a reason to be so rebellious!
But more than all, BUZZGOTABDUCTED. Haha. I'm excited to see more! 8D I also can't wait to see what you've done with the Smith family (if they appear)!
...Sorry for my ridiculous comment, but wow, this is good.
If I blocked you on Facebook, it's because I didn't know it was you. When did you send me a request? Yes, I should put up a warning for that. By the way, that is not a term I would ever use and is only there because it is vital to the story.
Haha. The ending caught ME by surprise, too. I was finishing up taking some shots in the house when I heard the abduction. I literally gasped when it happened!
:D I loved this! I especially love the characterization of the Grunts (I never liked the idea of him being physically absuive/deliberately cruel to Ripp), and the idea of Crystal and Buzz together! I briefly tried that out in my own game and they were such a good match. She even looks a little like Lyla. And alien babies from Buzz? Yes please! (He is going to be so traumatized, poor guy.)
It was interesting and refreshing to see a little humanity from Olive, too. I'm curious (no pun intended) to see where her friendship with Bunny goes. The question is, can Olive be trusted around anyone?
Thanks! Buzz has high chemistry with both Crystal Vu and Lola Curious. I was actually entertaining the idea of him and Lola, but he sort of chose Crystal on his own. She and Lazlo are so completely wrong for each other--no chemistry at all. I've never seen Buzz as evil, just a bit clueless and misguided.
I've never liked it when he's made out to be abusive, either. It just doesn't fit with his character as I imagine it. Yes, he will be VERY traumatized, which is leading to some interesting plot developments.
Olive's friendship with Bunny drives nearly the entire story arc, so you'll be seeing quite a bit of the two of them. :) Whether Olive can be trusted remains to be seen.
I am loving this! When it ended I was like "Noooo! More!". You are really good at developing characters and writing dialogue. I felt sympathy for both Buzz and Olive, and Bunny is so sweet and funny, I love her to bits. Can't wait for more!
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Oh my God, I am loving this so much!
First of all, Bunny and Shrödinger are awesome. I love the way you wrote them. I also love the fact that you gave Ripp a reason to be so rebellious!
But more than all, BUZZGOTABDUCTED. Haha. I'm excited to see more! 8D I also can't wait to see what you've done with the Smith family (if they appear)!
...Sorry for my ridiculous comment, but wow, this is good.
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Awesome story, it worth the wait. Keep them coming, please! +)
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I'm glad you liked it. :)
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It was interesting and refreshing to see a little humanity from Olive, too. I'm curious (no pun intended) to see where her friendship with Bunny goes. The question is, can Olive be trusted around anyone?
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I've never liked it when he's made out to be abusive, either. It just doesn't fit with his character as I imagine it. Yes, he will be VERY traumatized, which is leading to some interesting plot developments.
Olive's friendship with Bunny drives nearly the entire story arc, so you'll be seeing quite a bit of the two of them. :) Whether Olive can be trusted remains to be seen.
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