where the skin has forgotten you (R/S, NC-17)

[regala_electra]

Yes, another R/S story. With teh angst and smut and all those things.

I'm sick dammit, I'll do what I want.

where the skin has forgotten you
Author: Regala Electra
E-mail: regala_electra@yahoo.com
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Remus/Sirius (Remus/Lily)
Summary: I wish to remember where the skin has forgotten youAuthor's Notes: Set after GoF (Lie Low at

Comments

[i_got_spunk]

so classy. i love you :3

[regala_electra]

Hee, love you back!

[ladyblack888]

This is so beautiful, so true, so right, and you made it painful and wrong. I'm incoherent. I love it. *friends*

[regala_electra]

*friends back*

This is so beautiful, so true, so right, and you made it painful and wrong

Oh, thank you. I worked a heck of a long time on this, and I'm so happy that the words came out how I wanted them to and I feel at least that the characters are honest to their natures.

[adrenya]

Beautiful and a bit haunting.

Its things like this that make me glad to have friended you.

[regala_electra]

Ooh, haunting, yes, that was totally what I was aiming for. Particularly in the Lily-scene, but when dealing with memories, they are quite haunting.

*merrily friends back*

[siryn99]

That was beautiful. The desperation is so palpable, it breaks my heart. Lovely job.

[regala_electra]

The desperation is so palpable, it breaks my heart

Mmm yes, I wanted to get the emotions really across, so I'm glad you felt it.

Thank you for the feedback.

[bittersend]

I've said it before I'll say it again,

Some of the best writers of my day are fanfic writers.

The pain, the beauty, the absolute gloriousness of this fic haunts me.

"I wish to remember where the skin has forgotten you"
and
"The skin remembers, that was the lie, the skin remembers, it screams with the memories, stealing away pretenses, easy falsehoods, which attempt to alter the reality of it all, and always laid bare what has passed. It is being marked, this stark realization, and there is nothing that he can recall that ever can come close to it - nothing."

That's amazing in ways I can't put into words.

[regala_electra]

The pain, the beauty, the absolute gloriousness of this fic haunts me.

O_o. Oh thank you. You're far too kind.

That's amazing in ways I can't put into words.

Hee. It took a long time for me to work out those really descriptive parts and I'm really happy they worked on an emotional level.

I truly wanted it to have a ghostly type of effect and I'm so happy it was properly conveyed.