{Fic} Unchanging Love

[reg14]

Chapter 13 - “WHAT?! YOU BOTH LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH  THAT BOTH OF YOU ARE WILLING TO DIE FOR EACH OTHER???‼‼”

“That’s a good idea…” Karina smirked as she pointed the gun to Jin

“NO please don’t” Kazuya begged

“So you want to die instead? That’s also good…” Karina smirked as she pointed  the gun to Kazuya

“Karina if you want

Comments

[snow_meow]

It is good that everything worked out.

Somehow I feel like you rush to complete this chapter.
Everything which is essential is there but the dialog and the plot is like rushed to end this fic well and ASAP. ^_^

[reg14]

lolz i seriously dont work well with action =(
waah but anyways haha im kinda wanting this fic to end coz if it's too long the story would come out weird hehe anyways thanks for reading

[granity20]

tapos na ba ito???bitin kasi ako....-_-

[reg14]

hindi pa tapos hehe wala lang time mag update =)

[granity20]

ahhh...post na lng ang kulang???

[reg14]

hindi e haha walang time mag update coz of work hahaha maybe soon pag may break na haha