Reflection I • Peachy (I'll Pick You Up At Eight)

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FOR: Everyone ♥
Title: Peachy (I'll Pick You Up At Eight)
Rating: T
Word Count: 1.5k
Warnings: profanities
Summary: Junmyeon is Kyungsoo's best friend. Kyungsoo is hopelessly in love.
Author's Note: hello! this took me quite some time to write and it's kind of a mess and i honestly don't know where it ended up going, but oh well! hopefully y'alls

Comments

[eexiee]

i'm only crying a little bit ;;;;;; cute story development and i hope they stay together forever <3 <3

[alexa31]

This was just... perfection, honestly! I loved it, the angst especially, and the sweetness of it. But I have a question. The bar scene and the end scene, are these in the correct order? Or is it flashbacks to their failed attempt at a relationship?

Junmyeon acts as if nothing has changed. He laughs off the memories of a failed relationship, thinking about the times that they were both young and reckless with too much time on their hands. Kyungsoo wonders how he can brush it off so quickly. As the night goes on, Junmyeon does most of the talking, and Kyungsoo tries hard to ignore the pain in his chest.

It seems like it, right? Because that really hurts, so much. I wish we could have had a bit of the fluffiness of a moment of theirs, but I still loved this. A real, real pity that they didn't work out. My heart really breaks for Kyungsoo. I wonder if they just didn't click, or the timing was all wrong, or they were too young. A sad, realistic ending, but my heart aches for that happy ending. Wonderful fic.

[apaixono]

Oh no now I'm sad ;n; you'd think it's like the usual slow build-up fic where they finally get together after years and years but the flashback happened and- ;n; this hurts my heart in the most beautiful way thank you authornim ;n;