Comments | reeses6826: Hearts in the Underworld

reeses6826

Hearts in the Underworld - 2/?

Sep 29, 2009 12:37

Title: Hearts in the Underworld
Chapter: 2/?
Author:reeses6826
Genres: Angst, Romance, Violence, Smut (all eventually)
Pairings: Aoi/Uruha (central), Reita/Kai, Kai/Uruha, Reita/Ruki (all eventually)
Warnings: Gambling, Illegal Activity, Blood, Non-con (all eventually)
Summary: A downhearted gambler, a hot-blooded street-fighter, a mysterious crime lord, a ( Read more... )

reita, aoi, uruha, rating: nc-17, gazette, fic, kai, ruki

Comments 21

blueberrykiwi September 30 2009, 05:04:42 UTC

oh no...Ruki and Aoi are brothers? nice...

reeses6826 September 30 2009, 15:51:49 UTC

yup.. oh no!! haha.. thanks for reading & commenting :)

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reeses6826 September 30 2009, 15:55:01 UTC

oooo i'm glad you liked it!!! yes, behind cute, smiley kai is evil, perviness... just like you and me!

i'm glad you already love the story and don't worry, i don't make love with my stories (cough, cough) anymore. XD thanks for reading & commenting!!

ashley_regret September 30 2009, 05:39:38 UTC

i think saying that i loved this would be an understatement XDD
this really looks quite promising and interesting
i'd quote my fave parts, but it's the entire fic ^-^
great job!!! update soon PLEASE!!!

reeses6826 September 30 2009, 15:56:02 UTC

oh thank you!!! very nice comment !!!

p.s. your icon still make me smile :)

xenocia September 30 2009, 09:01:35 UTC

You and your LJ's stupid ninja posts D: always eluding my friends page!

Anywho~ good chapter!~ lots happened :3

a tattoo-adorned body on which he opted, to the dismay of many, not to put a shirt.
I hate it when guys do that D: there are just some males who should never ever go around without a shirt on. NEVER.

Ruki was his salvation.

That's why Ruki couldn't touch him that way. Reita knew he was already playing with fire even spending time with the younger man, but there was a line he simply would not cross.
I've never really been huge on Reita/Ruki, but this was super cute. Reita's so noble~ in a twisted way, lol.

"Reita's smiley pervert sidekick?"
Poor Kai, slotted into demented evil man once again ;_; he's just misunderstood! Lol. I bet Uru likes the attention << >> :D

He walked into the kitchen and turned on the coffee maker. Then he rummaged through the refrigerator for some eggs and bread, resolving to make breakfast for his older brother.

Aoi probably had a long night.HOSHIT. OH SNAP. WUT NAO ( ... )

xenocia September 30 2009, 09:03:35 UTC

Oh. And it's true. Rising Sun never gets old~

reeses6826 September 30 2009, 16:10:31 UTC

HAHAHA your comments always make me laugh!!!

just so you know, even though he's technically japanese, i pictured the Cobra as one of those hispanic guys with all the tattoos that lacks the body for it so i wanna say, "You need a shirt! Tu necesitas una camisa, papi!!!"

and Kai.. well... someone has to be the bad guy! there can't be 5 good guys (although Reita is like half good guy/half bad guy).

and my fave comment ever: "HOSHIT. OH SNAP. WUT NAO." HAHAHAHAHA!!! *falls off chair laughing*

and as far as Ruki loving Reita despite what happened to Aoi, Ruki doesn't actually know how badly Aoi got beat up and also, theres more to it but you won't find that out til the next chapter *giggles demonically*

p.s. hahaha... Bawls... just for you babe *winks*

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reeses6826 September 30 2009, 16:14:11 UTC

Yay!! i'm glad you liked it. i'm also glad you listed everything i like about each character :) don't worry, i'm already working on the next update... interesting stuff to come (i hope)!

thanks for reading & commenting!!!