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reeses6826

Hearts in the Underworld - 8/8

Oct 22, 2009 02:25

Title: Hearts in the Underworld
Chapter: 8/8
Author: ( Read more... )

reita, gazette, aoi, fic, kai, uruha, ruki

Comments 33

xenocia October 22 2009, 06:41:47 UTC

Oooh! Grats on finishing! ^^

"But I'm going in alone."
Heroic sayings like these always scare me D: Why would he go in alone! He's not exactly a prize fighter!

Aoi just squeezed his eyes as Kai's hand moved just beneath the borders of his pants and his fingers toyed with the band of his boxers.
EHEHEHHEHE. KAI. <3

"God, he was such a fucking slut. Look at him. Little bitch has never looked hotter than when he had my dick in his mouth."
TRU FAX. I love Kai >>;

"It's the only way, you know it is. And tell Ruki that ... before I died ... I said to tell him that I love him and I want him to be happy."
NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU. Awwww, poor Ruki :( Huh. Why do I feel more sorry for Ruki than Rei. Weird <<

Anywho. It was a good end. It did feel a little rushed, but I think that might be easily remedied by an epilogue? I need closure :(

I liked it overall though :3 And why is your psycho pervert Kai so damn attractive D:

reeses6826 October 22 2009, 17:58:29 UTC

I might write an epilogue. I need closure too - but I have no idea what that would be just yet. Thank you for loving my psycho pervert Kai, I love him too. I think I may actually have a problem writing normal Kai now... oh dear...

Thanks for reading & commenting!!!

blueberrykiwi October 22 2009, 08:05:48 UTC

Nice ending, but it would be super great if you could give us an epilogue, please put a closure to this sone...
Oh...and you make a good bad Kai, I can soo imagine him with his smile doung all this stuff.

reeses6826 October 22 2009, 17:59:29 UTC

I will do my very best to write an epilogue - we'll see :)
Yay! Bad Kai = hot! God I love him ;)

Thanks for reading & commenting!!!

erikaoi October 22 2009, 08:54:17 UTC

Aww.u so mean.just leaving the story like that.i wan2 know is rei really dead.did aoi,uru&ruki make it2 save place?cud u make epilogue?preety please?

reeses6826 October 22 2009, 18:00:42 UTC

I probably will... just as soon as I figure out what it would say :) Sorry - I just have a habit of leaving cliffhangers, even at the end of stories XD

Thanks for reading & commenting :)

erikaoi October 24 2009, 07:27:43 UTC

awww....i wish u cud make it..thehe...

reeses6826 October 24 2009, 07:38:32 UTC

I'm definitely working on it - I promise :)

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reeses6826 October 22 2009, 18:02:18 UTC

I will hopefully write one. Sorry for the tears! *hands you extra tissues* But thank you for loving evil Kai, as do we all apparently ;)

Thanks for reading & commenting!!!

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reeses6826 October 22 2009, 23:28:06 UTC

I will try :)

Haha, oh thank you! I really do love bad Kai <3

virgillover October 22 2009, 16:28:07 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO it's finished D8

B-U-T this was an awesome story. I loved it, especially the way you wrote about Kai. Thank you so much! (hell yeah, I suck at commenting >_>)

reeses6826 October 22 2009, 18:03:39 UTC

Haha, your comment works for me! I'm glad you liked it - especially Kai (his evilness is my current masterpiece!)

Thanks for reading & commenting!!!