The Chosen One - Chapter Seven

[redvelvetribbon]

(This chapter I have aimed to be disturbing and discusses cannabalism and features a lot of screaming and mentions of starvation and torture etc. Also the first part of this story is true, which is what makes it more disturbing. You have been warned.)

“What have you got for me Duck?”

Gibbs strode into autopsy where his friend was currently

Comments

[taylorgibbs]

What an intense and compelling ride you have us on here! My heart breaks for McGee and the team.

[redvelvetribbon]

Thanks. Its been the story that has been in my head the longest (years) but seems most difficult to write as well.

re: The Chosen One

[redrayne717]

Just caught on to the whole Gibbs/McGee pairing, and found your stories through the Puppy Love comm. I'm really enjoying this one, and am anxious to see where this goes.

I do have a question about another of your fics. I found Realisation at ff.net, and noticed it hadn't been updated there since Oct 09. Is that one still being worked on, or is it out of commission?

Thanks!

Re: re: The Chosen One

[redvelvetribbon]

Just so you know Chosen one isn't a Gibbs/McGee slash pairing its more team. I have been very busy in real life and I am trying to finish several unfinished stories before i start anymore. So fingers crossed I will get the chance to go back it it but it might be a while.

WOW

[twfan_patricia]

I just speed-read through seven chapters, and holy freaking god! I am at a lack of words. It is just incredibly well written and your attention to details is very impressive. Do you have anything published out there? If not, you should totally find a publishor or agency and write a book or something!
I am in complete awe of you/ your writing!

Hoping for an update :)

Thank you for writing.