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Never Never Land Chapter 23 (Gibbs/Tony/Tim threesome, hurt/comfort)

May 03, 2010 22:00

Tony frowned as he stood back and carefully studied the large decorative porcelain vase he had painstakingly glued back together. There was a hole in it.

"There's a hole in it." Gibbs pointed out helpfully and Tony glared at him.

"I KNOW there's a hole in it Gibbs. I just don't know HOW there could be a hole in it. I picked up every single broken ( Read more... )

gibbs/tony/tim, threesome, never never land, slash, angst, hurt/comfort, lost boys series, sex fic

Comments 8

fanarts_series May 3 2010, 15:59:27 UTC

I love you and i love your updates honey !
I glad to see Tim feels a little more good, they're going to catch the bad guys, i'm affraid about the TPSD for tim but perhaps he needs that.

Can't wait for more.

redvelvetribbon May 5 2010, 00:11:17 UTC

Thanks for reading! Yeah i figured I couldn't just wind it up without knowing something about the guys that tortured him and whether they get caught.

murgy31 May 3 2010, 17:10:09 UTC

This story is so awesome! I loved that everyone has reconnected, but now they have to catch the bad guys.... I loved the fluff at the beginning but the angst at the end. Awesome job!

redvelvetribbon May 5 2010, 00:12:32 UTC

Thank you! Yes all happy, happy and then suddenly its back to reality.

starbuckssue May 3 2010, 17:15:51 UTC

I just love this story. Expanding on Tim and Tony's evening was wonderful, allowing the two boys to reconnect with each other which was just as important as Gibbs and Tim reconnecting. I think Gibbs and Tony have managed to heal the worst in him but how healed are they? And what is going to happpen with the raid? Can't wait for more, soon, pretty please. *Hands out cookie*

redvelvetribbon May 5 2010, 00:14:42 UTC

Yes Tim and Tony needed their time together as well. In some ways their relationship is more important as Gibbs couldn't have two subs if there were any issues between them. It would destroy them all.
I will try and keep up with the regular updates after that long break I had. I have the next chapter in my head I just have to get the time to write it.

taylorgibbs May 3 2010, 17:37:21 UTC

I love the flashbacks. Poor Tony tormenting himself LOL!

Things are getting serious again though. Hope Tim is ready!

redvelvetribbon May 5 2010, 00:16:13 UTC

Yeah Tony can't help tormenting himself! Ha he is a sub through and through...
And yes its suddenly back into serious and their time at Never Never is going to quickly start seeming like a fairytale.