Never Never Land Chapter 21 (Gibbs/Tony/Tim threesome, hurt/comfort)

Feb 16, 2010 22:33



“Come on Tim. I think we need to get cleaned up”

Gibbs nudged Tim with his head, feeling Tim clutch him tighter before reluctantly releasing him. Clambering off the bed Gibbs smothered the groan he wanted to make as his body protested and his back cracked alarmingly after being held too still for too long after such rigorous activity.

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angst, slash, gibbs/tony/tim, threesome, sex fic, lost boys series, never never land

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fanarts_series February 16 2010, 15:41:06 UTC
Oh my, it's always an interesting fic, i love your writing.

thanks a lot to share.

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redvelvetribbon February 16 2010, 22:46:57 UTC
No worries. Thanks for reading!

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murgy31 February 16 2010, 15:53:14 UTC
I absolutely love this story!!!! Fabulous Job!

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redvelvetribbon February 16 2010, 22:47:50 UTC
Thank you!

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taylorgibbs February 16 2010, 15:58:02 UTC
This chapter completely works and is so beautifully done! I love seeing Gibbs being rocked by his memories.

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redvelvetribbon February 16 2010, 22:45:37 UTC
Oh good. I was really woried that Gibbs had just gone really OOC - hes the one I have the least grasp of but this chapter kept insisting on being written

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taylorgibbs February 17 2010, 03:44:11 UTC
Gibbs completely worked for me. He's a protector.

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redvelvetribbon February 17 2010, 05:54:27 UTC
Yes. Your right. Thanks again. I value your Gibbs perspective because you do it so well.

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ruefull February 16 2010, 16:11:52 UTC
You're brilliant, and this story shows that! *sighs happily* You've done justice to all three men and to their unique and complicated relationship, especially under these circumstances, and I'm in awe. Wonderful!!!

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redvelvetribbon February 16 2010, 22:44:08 UTC
Thank you very much!

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starbuckssue February 16 2010, 23:30:40 UTC
This was wonderful, the improptu cleansing here worked so well for both of them, they really needed this reconnection too. I loved the way you worked the red velvet ribbon into the story too. Looking forward to more, your writing is wonderful so the more chapters the better!

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redvelvetribbon February 16 2010, 23:41:26 UTC
Im glad you thought it worked. Phew. Oh you picked up the velvet ribbon bit! I nearly took it out thinking it was a bit silly to insert myself in there in that way ....but then again Tim wanted the ribbon as a way of reclaiming what he had lost.

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