Souls Companion (The Child) McGee/Vampire Dante/Abby
Chapter Four
Abby sat and stared out of her apartment window, not really seeing anything as she thought over what Dante and Tim had said.
The pretty vision she had had for weeks of holding a tiny helpless being in her arms with her eyes and Tim’s sandy hair had twisted into a terrifying pale child with sharp claws and no heartbeat.
No matter how she ( Read more... )
Abby sat and stared out of her apartment window, not really seeing anything as she thought over what Dante and Tim had said.
The pretty vision she had had for weeks of holding a tiny helpless being in her arms with her eyes and Tim’s sandy hair had twisted into a terrifying pale child with sharp claws and no heartbeat.
No matter how she ( Read more... )
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Just quickly, it's people's dreams, rather than peoples dream's and perhaps it would make more sense if Timmy said "we're going to be fathers," rather than using the sigular.
As always, tell me where to stuff my ideas if you don't like them.
Wonderful as always.
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Just quickly, it's people's dreams, rather than peoples dream's and perhaps it would make more sense if Timmy said "we're going to be fathers," rather than using the singular.
As always, tell me where to stuff my ideas if you don't like them.
Wonderful as always.
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(Although I kind of like the singular on Father as Tim only is going to be the actual father but because of how they are entertwined with Dante it shows how weird everything is going to get? If you know what I mean.)
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Fortunately, its not hot here in NSW at the moment, but its been a shocking few weeks before this.
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Gasp gasp....
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