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redvelvetribbon

Free to a Good Home (PG 13)

Nov 09, 2009 19:54

“Clear!”

“Clear!”

“Clear!”

The calls rang out as the team stormed through the home of the suspected drug dealer.

“Ugghhh dead guy in lounge! Looks like our guy. ” Tony called out as he holstered his weapon and peered at the man sprawled messily across the lounge room rug.

“Dead guy number two in bedroom” Ziva called out.

Gibbs sighed and pulled out his ( Read more... )

one shot, humor

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grey853 November 9 2009, 13:10:52 UTC

LOL, OMG, poor probie. This hilarious. I was laughing so hard. I enjoyed the story. I could so see this happening on the show, too, because I have to say Tim is getting hotter with each passing season.

redvelvetribbon November 9 2009, 13:28:08 UTC

Yes sweet Timmy. Now just hop into your basket! :) Oh hes just so cute isn't he? Even Gibbs couldn't turn him down.

jack_infinitude November 9 2009, 13:57:43 UTC

MY LOVE FOR THIS KNOWS NO BOUNDS!!!!!!!

OMG. OMG. OMG. The cute. I am dying. McGee! Covered in puppies! Grinning like a lunatic! And cooing!

IF I TRIED TO TELL YOU WHAT MY FAVORITE PARTS WERE, THEN I WOULD END UP QUOTING THE WHOLE THING BACK AT YOU. I LOVE THIS.

redvelvetribbon November 9 2009, 14:27:05 UTC

:) Im glad you like. Had in my head for about ayear and just had to do it. I even loved the little Gibbs Fornell bit in the elevator.
Thanks for letting me know your joy!

jack_infinitude November 9 2009, 14:38:02 UTC

Fornell was awesome. I loved him too. (Also, Gibbs? Is whipped. So utterly whipped.)

redvelvetribbon November 9 2009, 23:56:08 UTC

Oh yeah you know he is! Totally!
(He just doesn't like admitting it to anyone....even himself!)

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rodabug November 9 2009, 15:41:10 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful. I know you say it's a one-shot, but a follow up to this would probably be just as funny!

redvelvetribbon November 9 2009, 23:57:24 UTC

If I can think of something good enough I will try.Thanks!

deathcomes4u November 9 2009, 16:19:27 UTC

redvelvetribbon November 10 2009, 00:00:09 UTC

Wow great compliment on the voices. Thank you and I now I want a little puppy too.
Or Tim to curl up on my bed !

admiralandrea November 9 2009, 16:43:24 UTC

:sporfle: Poor Tim! This was ridiculously funny and hugely entertaining. Thanks for brightening my grim November Monday!

redvelvetribbon November 9 2009, 23:59:05 UTC

No problems! :) Thanks for commenting. My angst has been getting me down lately so i thought I would lash out with some fun, fluff for a while and see where it gets me.