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redvelvetribbon

Companion Chapter 44

Aug 04, 2009 19:29

Dante released his beloved burden onto the bed and leaning down swept Timothy’s now silky blonde hair back across his forehead. His Little One was so exhausted he didn’t even stir as he lay half curled on his side.

With a scowl Dante turned and assessed the damage to his private and most intimate domain. The fact that it had been breeched so ( Read more... )

angst, tim mcgee, vampire fic

Comments 6

vixenonthemoor August 5 2009, 08:32:09 UTC

*dances and cheers!* More companion! More companion! Yay! I loved it, it's great, it always is. I'm running out of great things to say about this series.

Wonderful

redvelvetribbon August 6 2009, 04:05:35 UTC

Thank you. I have the next chapter pretty much planned out and already started so hopefully next update wont be too far away

judasmalfoy August 8 2009, 07:38:43 UTC

Aww I'm so glad everything's going back to normal. I loved Dante staking his claim for Tim at the end so the girls would back off. More please.

redvelvetribbon August 9 2009, 03:23:30 UTC

Oh yes there will be more. Coming to the end of this one but there will be a sequal as well Im planning.

qzee August 9 2009, 03:14:44 UTC

I have now read this from beginning to end twice. I simply love this story. I have to admit I didn't expect to as I normally am not into Vampire fic, but this was so full of rich detail and delicious moments that I could not help but savour it. The slow fall into love that Timothy experienced. The slow acceptance of all it meant to be a Companion, the evolution of his abilities until he "burst from his cocoon" as it were and became an Angel, all of it was powerfully moving and written in such a way that it became real to me. As if it could have happened, no MORE, that it had happened and we've just never been told the truth, or had the truth revealed in canon.

I simply love Dante. Such a vibrant OC, as are all the other characters you flesh out throughout the fic. Each one as real to me as the canon characters, as fully complex. This is a fic I know I can, and will, reread many times and still love as much as I did the first time I read it.

Brava! and Thank You for sharing it.

redvelvetribbon August 9 2009, 10:08:29 UTC

Thank you very much. Wow that is a great comment. There is still a little bit more to come and after a break I do plan a sequal as well.

Phew :) I am totally stoaked by your comments. This has been a labour of love, literally over months so Im glad that others are reading and enjoying.