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redturtleotaku

Forsaken - Chapter four - Part two

Jul 15, 2011 17:55

Dark predatory eyes met his own and he immediately realised that he’d made a mistake. He could see muscles tensing as fury glimmered in the man’s expression. Jin was rising to his feet slowly, eyes unblinking, disbelief clouded only by the anger that he felt at having being disobeyed.

Kazuya stuffed the toy into his robes and stared fiercely back ( Read more... )

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agustin1982 July 15 2011, 17:05:48 UTC

eehhhhhhhhhh what happen? what happen????

Why Jin do that???

Why Why??
Make me really curiouuuuuuuus~~~~

are_in July 15 2011, 18:18:19 UTC

uwaa what happened...
poor kazu...
thanks for the update...
can't wait for more~~

wonotice July 15 2011, 18:20:27 UTC

Noooooooooooo
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

the_fey_girl11 July 15 2011, 18:26:48 UTC

i've been following this fic since you first posted it and i have to say this is amazing!

you write the story so beautifully and in this latest chapter the emotions between Jin and Kazuya are so raw that it really hurts.

i am looking forward to the next one!

thank you for sharing this. =)

pinkporca July 15 2011, 20:50:16 UTC

Poor Jin, he just is so insecure. Poor Kame - to be sold??? Oh boy. Thanks for sharing.