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FIC: Bad Feeling Mornings (PG-13) - Fullmetal Alchemist

Oct 02, 2013 08:12

Title: Bad Feeling Mornings
Author: Zippit
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Timeline: Manga/Brotherhood
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Edward Elric, Roy Mustang
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: N/A
Word Count: 1201
Completed: October 2, 2013
Challenge: writerverse 24 Hour Challenge A
Prompt: Friday the 13th
Disclaimer: The characters portrayed within are not mine. This is ( Read more... )

fma pair: roy mustang/edward elric, year: 2013, fma char: roy mustang, challenge: writerverse, fma char: edward elric, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, type: fic

Comments 4

drummerdancer December 10 2013, 16:20:51 UTC

Oh my...I did not see that coming! This had all the signs of a rape fic...very sweet ending, though! And lol at Ed's oblivion as to why Roy wants to see him...*sigh* that's Ed for you...
Great job!

zippitgood December 10 2013, 16:30:04 UTC

Uh, sorry for that? It wasn't intended to be at all. :-\

And yes, Ed's always oblivious. He's only self-aware of what's important to him.

amethyst_koneko December 11 2013, 04:12:43 UTC

Oct 2, 2013? How did I miss this awesome fic when it was first posted?! I love your fics! :)

Jeez. Grumpy much Edo? From the way Ed's acting, you'd never think for a second that they were in a relationship to begin with let alone be celebrating the anniversary of one. :/ I see now why Roy went to the extra effort of clearing out the office and setting the mood in the office just so. Ed clearly needs a break and a reminder that someone loves him dearly. Take that kiss and roll with it Ed! You need a time-out! :)

zippitgood December 11 2013, 12:26:38 UTC

Haha, because I only just posted it somewhere where people could read it just now.

Yes, Ed's very grumpy in the beginning of this. I'm not sure why. He just is. Yes, Ed needs all the reminders he can get. He's very forgetful about things like that.