Tremble

[redsn0wflakes]

Tsurara had never seen Kurosaki, suave and composed professional swindler, disheveled. As in blindly stumbling and crashing against buildings and light posts, red faced and hair tousled. She had felt rather than seen him, almost falling from the impact of his larger body against her back.

Just as heavy as his physical weight on her small frame,

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[x_shock_me_x]

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Don't worry, I've written PWP with not even an ATTEMPTED stoyline xD

[redsn0wflakes]

Ahaha...which I one day want to attempt, just for the heck of it. xD

[x_shock_me_x]

Haha, I found smut so hard and never agin xD I can't BELIEVE the male was Pi but the female WASN'T Maki, I HAVE SO MUCH FREAKEN LOVE FOR THEM YO!

[idajj]

oh... that was such a bittersweet story.
i love the communion between the two. without falling out of character, they are together - one.

and the morning after started off very sweet and almost cute until reality hits them. i almost cried when i realised how the story is taking it's turn.
Kurosaki and Tsurara at their best - and worst.

I wish you would write a continuation for this. I would love it, to see how 'future' turns out to be.

[redsn0wflakes]

Aw, thanks! I'm glad they didn't turn out OOC.

Just because you requested it, I will write a continuation. I just got an idea, too. ^^ I'll try to get it up for you as soon as I can. Thank you for the encouragement!

[idajj]

you'd do that? right a sequel???? wheeeee!!
im glad to be an encouragement...
all Yamaki/Tsukuro should be encouraged! :)
tee-hee. will be waitingg!

[xcry]

And just when I thought this was going to be the first drunk!kurosaki story I've been waiting for all my life...lol, but it's still awesome as usual.

I loved the fact that he faked everything just so he can touch her one last time before going on that big revengeful mission of his. I do loved how things turned out, as always.

Oh and have fun in India! It's funny how we're both going on vacation in two days. YAY. =D. Will missers you much. <3

[redsn0wflakes]

Ahahaha...I wanted to write a drunk!Kuro too...it just ended up this way. xD One day, one day I will try again. Just the image of a singing, drunk Kurosaki trying to seduce our Tsurara is too funny.

Thanks! It didn't turn out to be too far-fetched and weird, I hope? xD Although, I can kinda see him faking...he's just that type of guy, eh?

Thanks! I hope you have lots of fun in Cancun too. I was surprised when you said you were leaving soon too. Yayy...we get to vacation "together." xD

[missiemae]

Ooohhh my heart went all tingly when he said "Don't go."

This seems that it'd be the only way Kurosaki would make his move, when he's left in that kind of situation. And it's so bittersweet. I absolutely love the morning after, that he so comfortably pulled her closer.

And I also love envisioning Yamapi as Kurosaki, so sexily draping his self all over Maki/Tsurara. And then Maki crying into Yamapi's chest... oh the image is so nice!!!

I'm so happy you posted! This is really a great treat!
and have a wonderful time! ^^

[redsn0wflakes]

Ahahaha...my heart would go doki doki if Pi/Kurosaki said that, especially if he was that close to me. xD

Yesh, Kurosaki is an idiot like that, but I guess that makes him even more lovable and interesting, eh? And yes, the image of Pi & Maki didn't escape me when I wrote this either. They're just so lovely together!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And thanks! I'll be sure to take lots of pictures & post about my "adventures." xD