It's not a happy ending nor is it aq sad ending but i loved it none the less, wow poor jared taken so much abuse from people who were supposed to protect him and just asshole school kids.
Thank you so much for your elaborate comment! I'm glad you enjoyed the story this much :)
Reading your impressions and thoughts on the story means a lot to me - I'm so relieved all of that stuff came across :) I left some aspects of the story vague intentionally but upon posting I was worried I maybe left it too vague.
i loved this!! so dark and intense. Jensen was singled minded in his desire to rid the world of bad men. sort of a hero, but not. and Jared, Jensen gave him his weapon to better his life.
I've never had the pleasure of reading a story like this before. It as different, strange and while I'm not pleased with Jared telling on Jensen about hurting his father, the ending quote made me happy. 'He's my little angel.' I thought that was dark but sweet. Anyway, thanks for sharing. Your writing is amazing!
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wow poor jared taken so much abuse from people who were supposed to protect him and just asshole school kids.
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Reading your impressions and thoughts on the story means a lot to me - I'm so relieved all of that stuff came across :) I left some aspects of the story vague intentionally but upon posting I was worried I maybe left it too vague.
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really an awesome story!! thank you for sharing!!
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