A Summer Day - one-shot

[redrum669]

Title: A Summer Day
Beta: unbeta'd
Rating: PG-13 (see warnings)
Genre: AU
Pairing: Jared/Jensen
Spoiler/Warnings: Mentions of: drug use, non-/dub-con pornography & child abuse
Word Count: 5.900

Summary: A chance meeting at a deserted motel pool. A lesson in swimming, a white shirt and a name. Sometimes it's the small things that have the

Comments

[snfan7797]

That was amazing.
My only complaint? - I want more! I need to know about Jensen.
Please say that there's a sequel to this floating around in your head.
Thanks for sharing.

[redrum669]

Thank you :) I'm happy you liked it!

No need for complains, just for patience :P I'm already working on the sequel. Looking forward to seeing you back around for it!

[cindyls1969]

If I could see, I could write a better comment but for now, just...wow. Heartbreaking and sweet. I often people watch and think of stories about them, how a stranger might change their life. Thank you.

[redrum669]

Thank you very much :D So happy you liked it!
Yeah, I sometimes do that, too :)

[corbyinoz]

This is so beautiful and so sad. Brilliantly written! Oh, I have to find out what happens next! Please say you're going to write a sequel? A happy ending sequel? I know, it's not likely to end well, but just this once...?

[redrum669]

Thank you very much for your kind words! I'm very happy you enjoyed it.

Yes, don't worry, I'm already working on a sequel. I don't want to give away too much, but about the happy ending... I guess it'll depend on your definition, but it'll be peaceful. I hope. Maybe. We'll see... ;)

[cillab42]

Wow. Your Jensen was just so broken, so jaded and still in his own way, innocent. You know that this meeting changed both boys in some way, but it's sad to think what could happen to Jensen. My heart breaks for him.

[redrum669]

Thank you very much :)
Yeah, times probably haven't been easy for Jensen, but thanks to Jared he's got at least on good moment in his life. Maybe it helped him for his future.

[roxymissrose]

You really made me feel Jensen's hopelessness in this story. It's heartbreaking the way he doesn't have the faintest idea of what hope is and barely a sense of self. Jared is obviously the only nice thing that's ever happened to him. It must have been a constant sadness in Jared's life, finding and losing Jensen all in one day.

[redrum669]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad to hear I managed to get all the right emotions across :)

Yes, that day was probably both the best and the worst day in Jared's life. It certainly had a great impact on the way he lived his life from then on.