Vision - Nine (9/15)

[rednihilist]

Summer 2005. San Diego, California.

It's August, and true to form California's like an oven constantly set on broil. It sucks because there's no AC in the Impala and sticking to the seats in bumper-to-bumper traffic is just about the suckiest way to spend an afternoon. It's awesome, though, because everyone around him is just as miserable and most

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[twinsarein]

Woo hoo, another chapter! This one was a little more lighthearted than past sections. It was nicely done. I liked Dean's Spiderman impression in spying on Sammy. The part with Adam was sweet, it's nice to see them becoming closer. Dean can use that in his life.

[rednihilist]

He totally was pulling a Spidey, wasn't he? Like a cross between that and a peeping-Tom! XD

Dean's a sucker for family, so getting him to bond with Adam wasn't all that hard. Later, when Sam's back in the picture. . . now that's when the real drama will begin! :/

Thanks for reading, hon! I love and appreciate all your support.

[roxymissrose]

Thank you so much for updating this-I was just about to turn in and here this is! Happy!

It's interesting how much like Sam Adam is, and how absentSam is kind of a big place in their lives.

I still want to kidnap Adam and make him happy, poor thing.

[rednihilist]

Happy to oblige, roxy! XD

Well, I figured, Adam's a combination of John and his own mother, and Sam's a LOT like John, so. . . yeah. There are gonna be some definite similarities there. Just wait till I get around to bringing Sammy into the story. That should be interesting (or disastrous, one of the two).

I'm kinda messing the kid up, I know, but then that's part of the fun, isn't it? Breaking 'em down just to build 'em back up and do it all over again: the Fanfic Writer's Motto! lol

Thanks for reading (and commenting)!