Of course, I have to scream 'NO!', because I need more. The emotion here is so thick. The confrontation is totally bittersweet and I just feel for Dean so much.
Oh, you're a quick one! *blushes* I admit I love that you're digging this. This is the first story I've really written in the SpN fandom, so it's so incredible to have such good reception for it!
Why hurt boys in only one fandom, when I can't hurt them in two? *EG*
What emotion you are writing here - brilliant! You capture Dean's feeling so well and I'm truely impressed with the power in your prose. You keep taking my breath away with this story. Well done.
Wow, those are quite a few compliments there, hon! I feel honored that you think so, and my witty retort is "Look who's talking." :)
Did you notice? I'm attempting to write in present tense for the first time ever. I thought it suited Dean a little more than the past tense. He seems like more of an immediate, wing it, kinda guy, right?
I look forward to posting stories just to see your reaction, hon. You're like a cheerleader, a very, very good one! *hugs*
Aw shit! That was so intense! Erg--my jaw hurts from clenching my teeth. Boy, you captured Dean perfectly! And I *love* that sink thing--sort of flirting with hurting himself and not really his fault if it turns out badly, poor Dean. And the shot he took at his dad. He meant to hurt the man and I think he hurt him more than he thinks.
I don't think Dean has it in him to actually, actively, commit suicide. At least not yet. *EG* Being really reckless, though? OH, yeah. He'll walk that line and probably not even realize how much he wants to cross over most of the time. :(
Thank you for reading. I was waiting for you to find this, and I think I actually squealed when I woke up and saw you'd commented. :D
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This is brilliant.
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Why hurt boys in only one fandom, when I can't hurt them in two? *EG*
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Did you notice? I'm attempting to write in present tense for the first time ever. I thought it suited Dean a little more than the past tense. He seems like more of an immediate, wing it, kinda guy, right?
I look forward to posting stories just to see your reaction, hon. You're like a cheerleader, a very, very good one! *hugs*
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Duane Allman--heh!
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Hee! *wink*
I don't think Dean has it in him to actually, actively, commit suicide. At least not yet. *EG* Being really reckless, though? OH, yeah. He'll walk that line and probably not even realize how much he wants to cross over most of the time. :(
Thank you for reading. I was waiting for you to find this, and I think I actually squealed when I woke up and saw you'd commented. :D
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