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ladyjanelly September 19 2015, 13:31:32 UTC
This is really interesting. I love/hate how Foggy's reaction is colored because of Mary's gender, and how Fisk reacts to having put his hands on a woman in violence. I'd love to see the aftermath (I brain-glitched and wrote aftermask).

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rednihilist September 19 2015, 15:42:58 UTC
Thanks, hon! Foggy was def, like you said, love/hate to write. All three guys here put Mary the victim category, and since my AU follows canon, they're all kinda wrong. I view Foggy as the millenial man; he knows his gut reaction (humiliation) is wrong, which is why he doesn't ever express that part, sticking to the betrayal aspect. The indoctrination is so strong that most people buy into it unless it smacks 'em in the face.

I'd love to write Karen & Claire's POVs and def Stick's, to showcase the other end of the spectrum. To them, Mary's perfectly capable and above average, better than most anybody at what she does.

Thanks for reading & commenting! It means the world to me.

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