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rednihilist

The Heart of the Matter

Jan 31, 2010 00:52

( He Ascended once more. . . and he brought Dean Winchester with him. )

fic, thursday's child!verse, spn fic: the heart of the matter, supernatural

Comments 51

twinsarein January 31 2010, 07:12:52 UTC

Absolutely amazing! Bloody brilliant! Completely clever and creative! Dazzlingly delicous! If it wasn't so late, I'd go through the whole alphabet. This is something really wonderful and unique. It's an interesting look at Castiel's life and, at the end, his relationship with Dean and what helped to define that relationship. It was also intense and incredibly well crafted. I thoroughly enjoyed this, and am impressed by your never ending talent. This is truly a beautiful piece of work. It's not just a story; it's a piece of art.

rednihilist January 31 2010, 07:16:35 UTC

And you know I wouldn't have had the nerve to post it if it weren't for you.

*MASSIVE HUGS*

my icon fits this, yes? roxymissrose January 31 2010, 07:13:53 UTC

Fuck, that's amazing. It's beautiful--language, pacing, story--all beautiful. You knocked me out here, you really did. You can see the relationship to be creeping around the edges, and there's a reason for Castiel's love of Man, and what his understanding of Man is. And that sin of pride too, is creeping under hs skin...shit. I really love this.
Thank you!

Re: my icon fits this, yes? rednihilist January 31 2010, 07:18:38 UTC

SQUEExInfinity

And, yes, your icon is really, really perfect, rox! :)

winehouse February 9 2010, 04:40:02 UTC

So this is fantastic. I just wish I could say something more, but I'm busy reading it again.

rednihilist February 11 2010, 22:58:14 UTC

OMG, thank you! Hey, you going back to read a second time is all the feedback I will *ever* need!

yo_helena February 9 2010, 04:51:16 UTC

That is one hell of a story! It's like you ripped it right out of the Bible. I love how you describe Castiel as last in everything: Fourth, Thirteenth, Twenty-Second, Thirtieth--it seems that way, based on canon. Retrieving a soul from hell sounds like work for the best and brightest of the bottom of the barrel, and that's Cas all over. And the way you capitalize certain things (ex. Spoke With God) is excellent, too. A+++ to everything!

rednihilist February 11 2010, 23:00:59 UTC

I was definitely going for a Biblical, lyrical kinda vibe, so that you comment on that, and the wonky capitalization I employed. . . is *awesome*!!!

Cas is a mystery. Even in my (limited) research there was little info on that angel. Which means. . . perfect terrain for fanfic exploration!

Thanks so very much for reading and commenting! I am glad you enjoyed it!!!

very nice ndmzero February 9 2010, 04:55:38 UTC

this is an interesting angel POV - thank you for sharing.

Re: very nice rednihilist February 11 2010, 23:01:24 UTC

You're very welcome, hon!! Thanks for reading and commenting! :)