The little café [One-Shot]

Jan 24, 2009 19:55

Title: The little café [One-Shot]
Pairings: YunJae (one-sided)
Rating: G
A/N: My first fanfiction on LJ and my first fanfiction in English. But I hope you will still read =3 If it helps.. I got a good grade for the story in English? Yunho's PoV
Summary: When I was sixteen, I met a beautiful boy in a little café in my hometown ( Read more... )

one-shot, yunjae

Leave a comment

Comments 10

doma_arsonica January 24 2009, 21:53:20 UTC
Ohh there isn't anyone quite as beautiful as Jae. ^___^ But the ending was sad in a way. =( guess he'll never find Jae. Really nicely done..^__^

I really really love your icon.

Reply

redlolli January 25 2009, 14:30:08 UTC
thanks for your comment
yaay! my first comment on LJ! <3

sad? well.. he said he is happy ^^
but how can he be happy without jae right? ;D

haha i know.. it's so cute right?

Reply

doma_arsonica January 25 2009, 20:52:02 UTC
haha really? Niiice >:3

Yeah that's right. ^___^ haha Now I kinda want to read a second part *nudge nudge* x3

Ahh yes. =D I love that show with the Mini-dbsk.

Reply

redlolli January 26 2009, 15:15:09 UTC
A second part? xD
Jae suddenly stands before Yunhos door? xD

Yeah! They're so cute <3
If I don't get dbsk.. I'll just take one of them xD

Reply


thefrug January 24 2009, 22:49:30 UTC
Aww, that's so sad that when he went back the cafe wasn't there anymore. Jae really isn't stunningly beautiful isn't he?
<33
Shan

Reply

redlolli January 25 2009, 14:34:13 UTC
thanks for your comment <3

i wanted to write a different ending but it was homework for English and I had to use the last sentance as a ending ^^

and yeah.. jae is beautiful x33

Reply


chloe1910 January 25 2009, 14:51:05 UTC
It's sad that Yunho never confessed to Jaejoong and just left like that huh? And now, it's too late...

Reply

redlolli January 25 2009, 19:55:21 UTC
thanks for your comment! ^^

yeah it's kinda sad... he doesn't even know jaes name >.<
but well.. he is happy right? ^^

Reply


Leave a comment

Up