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Fic: Never Let Me Go

Jul 30, 2012 00:07

Title: Never Let Me Go
Fandom: Warehouse 13
Pairing: Myka/H.G.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 10, 048
Disclaimer: Characters of Warehouse 13 do not belong to me, sadly. I’m just borrowing them for a while, but I’ll put them back once I’m done. Inspired by this utterly fantastic gif. Title is taken from the song by Florence and The Machine ( Read more... )

pairing; h.g./myka, rating; nc-17, fandom; warehouse 13

Comments 7

green78 July 31 2012, 17:30:59 UTC

*...breathes* I...I think I was holding my breath through that entire story. Holy God Myka and Helena. Just...just...*faints*

You. Are. INCREDIBLE. This is one of the most gorgeous stories I have ever read. You capture their emotions in such a way that I just about felt them too (COLD SHOWER, need COLD SHOWER). And the love they weren't saying but expressing and the tenderness and wonder and and and...it all just made my heart hurt in the best way, and it's just so wonderful. I wish I could be more coherent about this, but my brain (along with other parts of me) has been melted by the wonders of this story. Love it, love it, LOVE IT, bookmarking it, saving it for days when I need to feel loved, 'cause that's how wonderful this story is. I cannot applaud you enough.

redlance_ck August 1 2012, 01:26:12 UTC

I don't even know what to DO with this comment. I literally don't have words. 'Thank you' refuses to cut it. It means a lot when anyone leaves a comment or a review, but when I get one like this... well. You made my day. Really. Huge smiles and everything. Thank you so, SO much. I'm just so happy you liked it. :)

rosesama35 August 1 2012, 06:23:16 UTC

It's one thing to read some very imaginative sexy-time fanfiction with a favorite pairing. Its a completely other thing to ready some fun sexy times that's so well written that you can almost feel everything that the characters are feeling as the story unfolds. And that's what you've done. If there is one thing that I can't stand, its a piece of writing with a severe lack of imagery., especially with something where there are huge sensual (sexy time!) themes. But you have not only made sure to cover the imagery well, but you really made me feel like I could feel everything that was going on (if I were lucky enough to ever find myself in bed with Jaime Murray lol ( ... )

redlance_ck August 2 2012, 02:35:31 UTC

I really don't know where to begin replying to this. Thank you so, so much. I'm so happy that people seem to like this and just really 'get' what I was trying to say and feel what I was trying to deliver. I wanted there to be all the usual feelings associated with smut, but I also wanted there to be actual emotional feelings, so I'm just really psyched that you said what you said about that. I'm also pretty happy about the 'you needing a drink/cold shower' thing too so... ;)

Really, thank you. Comments like this just completely make my day. I'd like to print them off and make them into a book I can flip through when I'm feeling down.

As for original fiction, it doesn't exist anywhere online right now. And there isn't a lot of it. ;) But someday... hopefully. :) Thanks for the interest! I don't think anyone has ever asked me about that before.

rosesama35 August 2 2012, 23:15:40 UTC

You are very very welcome! Glad I could put a smile on your face. I definitely understand the sentiment of mustering up the courage to post some writing on the internet and then getting back only one line (or worse, one sentence) comments. I know that I'd want a detailed or at least somewhat in depth review, so that's what I try to give.

As far as original fiction goes, I just figured that if your fan fiction is this nice then your original stuff must be pretty sweet! I have my own stuff that's nowhere near being complete myself, so I do wish you the best of luck with that!

~RoseSama35!
P.S.S: Do you write any fanfic for Legend of The Seeker?

redlance_ck August 3 2012, 01:04:38 UTC

In all honestly, I'm happy for any kind of review, be it a line, a sentence or even just a 'nice!', but there's something so... wonderful about receiving a review like the one you gave me. It gives a kind of closure to the accomplishment a person feels after completing a story, if that makes sense. So yeah, it's very, very much appreciated.

And thanks! Who knows, maybe someday it'll be floating around the interwebs somewhere. ;)

As for Legend of The Seeker - no, I don't. But you're not the first person to ask me that, which is odd. I've only really written for a handful of fandoms.

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redlance_ck August 6 2012, 00:38:05 UTC

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment!