You'll Shoot Your Eye Out, Kid!

[redhotketchup]

I was in ecstasy there, lying on the floor with her massive amounts of hair sweeping across my face. I pawed at her flowing locks not unlike a cat pouncing on a tiny bell held to a string being dangled in front of his face. Next came her thonged feet bumping into my arm, and then I remember her big toe traversing just across my upper lip. I should

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Grammar Police

[woo_in_the_sky]

"You're gonna blow your eye out, kid!"

Correction: "You'll shoot your eye out"

Re: Grammar Police

[redhotketchup]

That wouldn't be grammar. That would just be quoting it wrong. You're so anal retentive. (He shoots, he scores!)