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Jan 14, 2004 19:17

FIC: When You're Mine ( RPS: MR / TW )Title: When You're Mine ( Read more... )

Comments 8

emrinalexander January 14 2004, 16:55:29 UTC

I love this - I think it is one of the BEST TW/MR stories I've read (and I try to read a lot of them *G*). I think you did a wonderful job writing both guys, but you completely nailed Michael, as far as I'm concerned.

I hope you write more!

redfirecracker January 16 2004, 07:39:17 UTC

*blushes*

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

amandajane5 January 14 2004, 20:38:15 UTC

Oh my heavens! This is hot like a very very hot thing! I enjoyed it muchly! Wow!

redfirecracker January 16 2004, 07:39:58 UTC

Whee!

*dances*

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

ilexa January 14 2004, 20:51:03 UTC

Well, AmandaJane said "Go read!! RPS Hotness!" and I would have said something, but I was waaay too busy clicking the link, and *damn*! Where have you been my whole life? Cause mmmmm.... You've made me too incoherant to fb properly so, instead, I present myself, as a big pile of melted goooo.

Thank you for the hotness.

redfirecracker January 16 2004, 07:41:22 UTC

And what a charming pile of goo you are, too!

This is my first explicit porn story, and it was really difficult for me to write, so I am thrilled at the responses!

Thanks!

justblue0162 January 14 2004, 22:23:00 UTC

Fan-fucking-tastic! I really enjoyed the self-conscious and insecure side of MR, the way his mind would run off and the hesitance to believe TW was there for him. Wonderful, emotional, real story. Thank you!

redfirecracker January 16 2004, 07:43:26 UTC

Thank you for enjoying it and for taking the time to feedback me!

I had seen a picture of MR from his high school yearbook, and it inspired me to write him this way. Glad you liked!