"The walls are stone, great blocks of gray granite hung with tapestries like a medieval castle." I like the way the story flows, good balance between dialog & background. I don't really care for vampires, werewolves, etc., but this tale rather grabbed me -- I'd like to read more! I think you've done quite well.
Yay! Thanks for dropping by with words of encouragement . . . especially since, as you say, you're not crazy about the archetypes. I'm glad to know that it caught your interest!
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I like the way the story flows, good balance between dialog & background. I don't really care for vampires, werewolves, etc., but this tale rather grabbed me -- I'd like to read more!
I think you've done quite well.
Keo
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