So I wrote fanfic.

Apr 26, 2006 14:56

No, not *that* fanfic. Although there will, indeed be more McShep-Eighties-AU coming along shortly. Also, if anyone has any title suggestions? Give them here. I was originally going to call it "The Boys Of Summer" after the Don Henley song, but someone else used it first. I don't like to feel as though I'm plagiarizing ( Read more... )

i ficced, prison break, fic

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lucifrix April 26 2006, 18:53:01 UTC
Niiiiice. You just might want to put something about underage sex in the warnings, b/c some people freak.

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redfirecracker April 26 2006, 18:54:54 UTC
Whoops. Good point. I was worried about the incest and forgot about the underage-thing. Thanks!

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thelana April 27 2006, 22:41:53 UTC
Awww, quite sad/sweet. One thing I noticed:

The first time they fooled around, Lincoln was seventeen and Michael was eleven.

6 years age difference.

The second time they fooled around, Lincoln was twenty-one and Michael had just turned sixteen.

5 years age difference.

(though with birthdays and such it's totally possible. The show btw never defined the age difference. There are leaked scripts of the flashbacks. One has 5 years (11+16 the year their mother died) and the other had 4 years (11+15 the year their mother died).

more careful than he’d ever been with anyone else,

Awwww. Sometime I really want somebody to do a fic that goes more into Lincoln's sexual history. Most people hint at it, but it still leaves me curious.

As if, perhaps, refusing to make love to his brother would have been more wrong than actually doing so.

Somehow a very painful thought.

sleepy and intense, eyes gleaming in a vaguely frightening way.I like that sentence. That Michael isn't just all innocence, but that he has some of his intensity even ( ... )

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anisapologist April 28 2006, 01:34:09 UTC
Frighteningly hot. You must expand this!

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redfirecracker April 28 2006, 13:27:47 UTC
Yay! Glad you liked it!

In all honesty, it sat on my hard drive for a month while I struggled to expand it... I finally decided to just post as is and hope for more later.

Thanks!

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dirtandweeds April 28 2006, 01:56:04 UTC
Awwww. This was so sweet, I really liked it.

No need to be worried about the incest though. Most people in here are in favor of it - or maybe they just like it being Lincoln/Michael. I don't know - but who cares? It's incesty fun.

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redfirecracker April 28 2006, 13:29:54 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Incest was a big squick for me when I first entered fandom, so I do tend to overdo the warnings. It's good to be part of a community where it's accepted!

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dirtandweeds April 28 2006, 23:38:26 UTC
Well that's the thing. I don't know whether people in here actually accept it, or if they just ignore it for the sake of good smut. If there's one thing for sure though - is that people in here are more inclined to be truthful when you're sure nothing will come of it.

Personally, I don't find anything unacceptable about incest.

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redfirecracker May 1 2006, 19:14:58 UTC
Yay! Thank you!

And I agree with you about the prison setting... I've tried, and I just can't imagine them doing it like bunnies while in the joint. ;)

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