Like the Dawn - Dawn/Faith, BtVS {~1,100 words, rated R}

[slartibartfast]

Title: Like the Dawn
Fandom: BtVS
Rating: R
Pairing: Dawn/Faith
Summary: Faith is a force of nature. Dawn's okay with that.
Prompt: Snarky conversation, sexy kissing, kink. For Brigdh at femslash_minis!

Comments

[cmk418]

I like the tone you've set here - it seems true to both the characters and the situation. Incredible imagery throughout (especially the oh-so-hot flashback sequence). Well done!

[slartibartfast]

Thank you very much! You're too kind. :)

[wordsofastory]

Oh, wow. This is really, really well done. Excellent writing, and I totally adore your portrayal of both characters. This is hot and sad and just awesome. Thank you so much!

[slartibartfast]

No, thank you for such a lovely comment! ♥

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Great work! Hot yet bleak, and nicely unresolved leaving us to wonder and be tantalised...

[slartibartfast]

Hot yet bleak is my favourite. :) Thank you!

[sheepfairy]

Oh, this is really lovely. Your use of language is really wonderful!

[slartibartfast]

Thank you so much!

[lady_ganesh]

Oh, this is awesome. You've got Faith just right.