TeniPuri: (FIC) Sandcastles in the Clouds (Tezuka, Fuji) Gen.

[reddwarfer]

Title: Sandcastles in the Clouds.
Rating: Gen.
Word Count: 1,212
Characters: Tezuka-age 8, Fuji-age7
Summary: Anything's less boring than listening to their mothers talk.
Disclaimer: The owners of PoT own PoT
Notes: For evaporate who issued this challenge Tezuka and Fuji, gen, time-slip AU; Tezuka is eight and Fuji is seven. 1,000 words minimum, on a

Comments

[nana_chibi]

This is so cute!! I love how Fuji thought about Tezuka's character at the begining, and how they 'played', especially when Tezuka agreed and pointed out for the tennis racquet and the dragon - he did indeed play along with Fuji's imaginary game and that's very cute!

Tezuka's protest that he's a man, and real men don't like sweet things. - I love this line the best ^^

Thank you for sharing this with us!!

[reddwarfer]

Thank you, hon. I'm glad you liked it.

[happiestwhen]

Oh oh! Now this is AU I actually like! (Well, mostly I just adore stories about childhood, in any form... >.>)

I was really tickled by the dialogue. Especially: Tezuka waits a few moments, just looking and Fuji almost asks him if even has an imagination when Tezuka points a few degrees south. "There's a tennis racquet." *glee* I like how he surprises even Fuji with that, and how he lets himself go, relax, be a kid, just a little bit.

Eight-year-old Tezuka is such a strange thing to ponder, but you wrote him wonderfully, and wee!Fuji was just about the sweetest thing ever. ♥

[reddwarfer]

Thanks so much. I had such a fun time writing it. :D

[life_haze]

And of course it has to be a racket that he first sees. Thanks for sharing this.

[reddwarfer]

:D You're welcome.

[inner_demons_]

^___^ A bear falling? Higuma Otoshi~ Cute!

Great job ♥ They're both too adorable!

[reddwarfer]

Thanks! :D

[eliza_natsuko]

ah~ kawaii desu ^_^
i like it when tennis is somehow in an AU fic like the bear and whale

[reddwarfer]

Thanks!