Response to Valentines Day Challenge

[redchilly]

Title: Seduction: Gene Hunt Style!!!
Author: Red Chilly
Rating: Blue cortina, I think, to be safe
Word Count: 1424 words
Notes: I do not own anything at all unfortunatly, all belongs to BBC and Kudos.
Written in response to Valentines day challenge, my first ever long story so please be gentle.  Slash sam/gene

Seduction:

Gene Hunt Style!!

Since

Comments

[redkakumei]

Nice and funny. Loved it. :)

[redchilly]

thanks :-)

[dorsetgirl]

That's very sweet, and the pink rhymes are wonderful!

[redchilly]

thanks, rhyming was the most difficult part and trying to get them to sound like something gene would write.

[dorsetgirl]

They definitely did - well done, this is lovely!

[redchilly]

thanks again, i was quite nervous with this as it is only the second piece of fanfiction that i have ever written and the longest. i didn't trust myself with dialogue yet, in particular gene's unique voice. there was only one single thing spoken in the whole piece. ;-) i thought that i would experiment with description first.

[ladyhawke2]

I enjoyed this, the rhymes made me laugh and sound exactly like something Gene would write :)

[redchilly]

thanks, i was aiming for dirty limericks but they much harder to write, so gene came up with these instead, :-)

[redchilly]

sam always seems a bit paranoid so i could easily see him not getting the whole picture and thinking that someone was out to get him, well there was figurativly spearking ;-D

[timelord_sammy]

Aww, so cute ^^ Poor Sammy thinking someone's pulling a cruel joke on him.
Good job on making the poems sound Gene-tinted =P

[redchilly]

thanks, the gene like comments were easy but making them rhyme was difficult.

[clonesgirl]

This was cute and love the hot pink rhymes. They sound very much like Gene. Happy Valentine's Day. :)

[redchilly]

thanks and happy valentines to you too :-)