This was amazing! Gabe and Vicky were both fantastically complex, and the progression of their relationship was both logical and really nicely smouldering. And the prank war had me giggling out loud. :D
Here from bandgirls, and oh my god, this was amazing. I love Vicky setting the boundaries from day 1 and Gabe respecting them, and then allowing the situation to evolve, and the rest of the band being all protective and worried. And the prank war with The Cab balancing everything out.
::rereads:: Wow, that is so not coherent. I think what I'm trying to say is that the story/plot/romance progressed in a really natural way and you did a good job of balancing the emotional aspects with the funny.
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FANGS UP.
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the changes are perfect this entire thing is fabulous. yesyesyes
(ps you should link this on bandgirls)
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(will do)
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::rereads:: Wow, that is so not coherent. I think what I'm trying to say is that the story/plot/romance progressed in a really natural way and you did a good job of balancing the emotional aspects with the funny.
Reccing.
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