Fic Post: Unreliable Narrators (2/2)

[redbrickrose]

Part One

Comments

[elucidate_this]

lady, i love this, which you already knew. i'm so glad you posted it! mostly because you need to hear that other people think it's awesome too! and because i can finally start telling people to read it :)

[redbrickrose]

♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you, sweetie. And I owe a lot of it to you.

[offtheceiling]

Oh, wow. This is beautiful and aching and sharp. *hands* I don't even know what else to say. I love it.

[redbrickrose]

Thank you so much!

[disarm_d]

!!!

When I started reading this, I thought to myself that I should probably open up a comment window so that I could paste in all the ridiculously out-of-this-world amazing lines as I was reading. But then, I got so completely enthralled in the story, I didn't actually do it.

This was just ridiculously gorgeous and I'm all stunned and incoherent right now, but here I go trying to comment anyway.

All of your characterizations were perfect. Ryan as a character doesn't normally have the same draw for me that some of the others do, but in this? I was captivated and in love with him. I think you had the most amazing balance of edges and sweetness with Brendon. Spencer, oh my god, Spencer, just killed me dead, every time he was in a scene, and Jon was just amazing

[redbrickrose]

Oh, wow. I really appreciate the in-depth feedback. (And that Ryan worked for you here if he isn't always your favorite). Thanks so much!

[harriet_vane]

I love this! Your Ryan voice is really great, and I loved his descriptions of Brendon -- they felt totally true and real. (I clicked on neverneverfic's rec, too.)

[redbrickrose]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[warmingweather]

Oh, oh, oh. This was absolutely wonderful. I loved your look into Ryan's headspace and I loved the push-pull and the dynamics between him and Brendon. The scene with "I Never' was so perfectly overwhelming. This was an absolute joy to read, and I'll be thinking about it for some time.

[redbrickrose]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)