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redblonde7

By The Sea

Jul 22, 2011 11:48

Title: By The Sea

Genre: Drama/Romance

Pairing(s): USUK

Word Count: 2,401

Rating/Warnings: Mentions of death, homosexuality in Victorian times, 12/15

Summary: The Kirkland family had fallen from grace and now they scraped out a living with the rest of the lowest of the low. Alfred Jones, heir to the great Jones fortune, was staying with his brother in ( Read more... )

sealand, belgium, summer camp, england, america, canada, victorian au, hetalia, america/england, special relationship, au

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redblonde7 July 23 2011, 06:23:47 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

renuki July 23 2011, 08:48:58 UTC

I hope this time part will do Matt good.

"Arthur can't swim. He loves the water but none of our brothers would teach him. They normally preferred to push him under the water and keep him there," Peter explained in a matter-of-fact tone and Alfred looked shocked.

....that just bloody mean. (and someone is going to get swimming lessons. XD

Aww, I hope the lady is resting in peace now..

(and yeah, Alfred. You don't want to understand.)

redblonde7 July 23 2011, 17:10:52 UTC

Matt needs the time, his head is just messed up at the moment and he needs to learn why he is feeling so rubbish at the time.

Strange thing is, I can see Arthur's brothers doing that. All in good fun and playing a joke on their little brother but it still being really mean when you hear it from an outside POV.

She is.

Arthur and Peter didn't understand when they still lived in a house and went to school, but they caught up very quickly after they moved.

Thanks for the comment!

:D neko_witch0 July 23 2011, 18:25:31 UTC

Again, I enjoyed this very much! :D Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapters :D
Hohoho I want to see the swimming-lessions part! XD

Re: :D redblonde7 July 23 2011, 20:02:34 UTC

I'm glad you did. I'll try and write the swimming lessons part because it would be a little bit of fluff after all this angst and drama.

Thank you!

Re: :D neko_witch0 July 23 2011, 20:49:04 UTC

hahaha i look forward to the fluff then, it'd be nice indeed. good luck! :D

kasumicc July 23 2011, 19:22:54 UTC

Awww, Alfred's such a sweetheart ): He's willing to go that far for the brothers, especially for Arthur...I'm hoping to see their relationship to keep developing :)

redblonde7 July 23 2011, 20:05:02 UTC

Alfred is very sweet and nice. He wants to save everyone in the slums but it's just not possible so he'll just try and save one family. Their relationship just keeps getting strong.

Thanks!

xolavander July 24 2011, 20:21:06 UTC

Aww. I am so excited.
I liked this part, but I feel a bit bad for Matthew.

Very beautiful, nevertheless. <3

redblonde7 July 26 2011, 10:55:08 UTC

Well Matthew is a little screwed up at the mo. Thank you!