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redbells

ASOIAF/GOT fic: The glaciers made you

Jul 05, 2012 22:12

Title: The glaciers made you (and now you're mine)
Pairing: Jon Snow /Jeyne Westerling
Rating: R
Length: 3,358 words
Status: Complete
Warnings: Sex, violence, swearing. Spoilers through A Dance with Dragons
Notes: Written for asoiaf_exchange Summer 2012. Title and cut text from Great Lake Swimmers' "Your Rocky Spine."

( The sky was dark but you were clear. )

game of thrones, jeyne westerling, a song of ice and fire, #fic, jon snow, jon/jeyne

Comments 1

pearlseed July 7 2012, 03:22:50 UTC

This wonderful story is a fine off=shoot of the original. The voices sound right, the tempo sounds right and I find I am completely smitten with the wolves, possibly to loving them more than the people in the story. I like this very much. Your cadence is strong and potent, a right heartbeat in the strange stories all woven. Your language is beautiful (please one of his last answers okay this jarred like a blow to my face) it is rich and strange, like an exceptionally excellent tequila, with a hot little chaser, the blood that ties them all together somehow. Ya done well in what you've writ. More?