Comments | redbells: Pirates fic: it takes an ocean not to break; part four

redbells

Pirates fic: it takes an ocean not to break; part four

Jul 13, 2011 11:48

Pairings: Will/Elizabeth, Jack/Elizabeth
Rating: PG-13
Length: 287
Status: WIP
Notes: Written for djarum99 for help_japan

( Port in a storm. )

potc, elizabeth swann, will/elizabeth, #fic, jack/elizabeth

Comments 11

beautyfrompain July 15 2011, 08:33:55 UTC

Guh. <3333

redbells July 15 2011, 18:17:53 UTC

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redbells July 15 2011, 18:43:28 UTC

I have no idea! But yay, last line love!

Teague and Jack would be fabulous politicians - I would vote for them and then the world would be super awesome because imagine what crazy pirates could do if elected to office :P

ILU AND YOUR FABULOUS COMMENTS!

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sparrows_swann July 16 2011, 04:48:16 UTC

"A non-answer. It should not surprise her, not when he and Jack are so obviously cut from the same cloth."

Love, love and love! The character of Teague is so fascinating and Keith Richards, being who he is and living how he's lived and having written the songs he's written and being the one who portrays him just helps the imagination so much, doesn't it? :)

redbells July 18 2011, 19:32:09 UTC

Teague is a fascinating character in his own right, but Keith Richards adds such unbelievable depth: you've put it perfectly. The life he's lived and the songs he's written and the man he is just add so much Teague - it makes him even more mysterious and awesome :)

Thanks for the read and the write - I absolutely adore your comments!

geekmama July 16 2011, 16:11:04 UTC

Love this whole beautifully angsty scene, and these lines particularly...

His grin is wry, curving around the stem of his pipe. “Done a lot of living in my time, dear King.”

A non-answer. It should not surprise her, not when he and Jack are so obviously cut from the same cloth.

redbells July 18 2011, 19:34:37 UTC

Thank you! I think sparrows_swan hit the nail on the head when she described this story as a Disney fairy tale in reverse: a darker retelling of the original. I've been trying to gradually steer away from the angst, but it just keeps coming back. Hopefully it will continue to be beautiful :)

whensheflies July 16 2011, 18:35:27 UTC

I have a soft spot for any Teague and Elizabeth interactions. This was no exception. Beautifully written as always. On to part 5!

redbells July 18 2011, 19:36:00 UTC

Thank you! Teague will be around for a good while - I have plans for him, as you'll start to see in part five :)

As always, thank for the read and the write!