Comments | redangel66: A little poem of no regret but full of hate.

redangel66

Aug 14, 2006 12:15

The Anger burning in her eyes ( Read more... )

Comments 2

devilblaze999 August 15 2006, 03:09:31 UTC

I think it's good. But you over used the word 'The' to start your phrases.

Otherwise, tis fantastic.

redangel66 August 15 2006, 04:27:57 UTC

No I meant to do that. It's an emphasis thing.