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[bratanimus]

Title: Nothing But Fighting
Author: bratanimus
Summary: Remus/Lily, set during their sixth year at Hogwarts. Merlin, why hadn’t James told him how much fun fighting with Lily was?
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Language
Word Count: 4128
Author’s Note: My prompts were the Decemberists’ song, first fight, and lust. The fic doesn’t really have anything to do with the

Comments

[belladonna1986]

oh. my. god.

That was absolutely amazing to read! I usually never read Lily/Remus, being a R/T shipper, but this fic was written in a gorgeous, detailed and enticing way, you just have to enjoy it.
Lady Bracknell recced it and I was not disappointed *grin*
I love the way, you described Remus emotions, the whole situation you created, pupils preparing for the coming war and the tension is breath-taking.

The agitation, Remus feels during and after his duell with Lily, was described perfectly, if there was a drug that could provide that feeling, I would be hopelessly addicted to it.

Great characterization, especially the description of their way to fight, so in character: Sirius and James, the ones to show off and Remus more subtle and quiet.

Wonderful work!

[paceisthetrick]

Perhaps she’d let it land on purpose, knowing the effect it would have on him. On any man. Smart girl. He grinned at her and felt butterflies in his heart when he saw her grin back.

Fantastic, just fantastic work!