Stockholm Syndrome - Chapter Three

Oct 21, 2012 02:57


Title: Stockholm Syndrome - Chapter Three
Rating: pg-13 ish
Word Count: ~2500
Summary: Fernando Torres goes missing before his transfer to Liverpool. Sergio deals with it in his own way
Disclaimer: Not true, fortunately.

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pairing: sergio ramos/fernando torres, character: fernando torres, character: sergio ramos, sernando, fic: stockholm syndrome

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difusion October 21 2012, 03:56:56 UTC
oh my god, sergio ur so evil pls htroihjrjhord;jhtrsh;ys'tjuk;i

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red_robynn October 21 2012, 04:21:18 UTC
I dunno if speaking in tongues is good, or bad or a bit of both but thank you for commenting! And verr promptly too, may I say. <3

This is the third time I have tried replying now, damn my phone.

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vitaminbjorner October 21 2012, 11:16:29 UTC
rtfghiopåæølkjghyudsr*sigh* sergio how the hell did you get *this* fucked up?sdfghjlokhfdhtgfrppoåokjoyu

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red_robynn October 21 2012, 14:15:23 UTC
Sometimes people just do crazy things. Thanks for commenting, :D

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golden_slumber1 October 21 2012, 12:01:47 UTC
This chapter was intense and I had the same fear as Fernando when Sergio started to walk towards him with purpose. What upset me the most was, however, how weak Fernando is because Sergio never seems to bring any food to him!! At least feed your prisoner Sergio for god's sake haha.

Anyway, looking forward to more of course and how you'll handle the story from now on.

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red_robynn October 21 2012, 14:17:52 UTC
Sergio certainly does seem to be complacent when it comes to food. I am glad that it's giving you such an emotional response, what writer really wants more than that, if you're feeling what the people I am writing are feeling! Thanks for the awesome comment! More next week!

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red_robynn October 21 2012, 14:20:02 UTC
Sorry he's scaring you! Well, not really, it's supposed to be fairly creepy and stuff, so really I am glad! I guess I can be sorry I am glad it's creeping you out?

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konishi_zen October 21 2012, 13:10:27 UTC
It was pretty brutal, but the last part is what chilled my blood even more, that Fernando admits he needs Sergio. Despite knowing how screwed up the situation is. Damn. Just Damn.

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red_robynn October 21 2012, 14:22:56 UTC
If there is anything more complicated that Sergio's mind in this, it could only be Fernando's, as I am sure you can well imagine! Poor baby :(

Thanks for commenting!

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konishi_zen October 22 2012, 23:52:57 UTC
I honestly was expecting for Fernando to be pretty straightforward, but then this story has done everything I didn't expect, so yeah. Wow.

Thanks for updating!

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