Title: Stockholm Syndrome - Chapter Three Rating: pg-13 ish Word Count: ~2500 Summary: Fernando Torres goes missing before his transfer to Liverpool. Sergio deals with it in his own way Disclaimer: Not true, fortunately.
This chapter was intense and I had the same fear as Fernando when Sergio started to walk towards him with purpose. What upset me the most was, however, how weak Fernando is because Sergio never seems to bring any food to him!! At least feed your prisoner Sergio for god's sake haha.
Anyway, looking forward to more of course and how you'll handle the story from now on.
Sergio certainly does seem to be complacent when it comes to food. I am glad that it's giving you such an emotional response, what writer really wants more than that, if you're feeling what the people I am writing are feeling! Thanks for the awesome comment! More next week!
Sorry he's scaring you! Well, not really, it's supposed to be fairly creepy and stuff, so really I am glad! I guess I can be sorry I am glad it's creeping you out?
It was pretty brutal, but the last part is what chilled my blood even more, that Fernando admits he needs Sergio. Despite knowing how screwed up the situation is. Damn. Just Damn.
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Anyway, looking forward to more of course and how you'll handle the story from now on.
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