Stockholm Syndrome - Chapter Two

[red_robynn]

Fic Name: Stockholm Syndome - Chapter Two
Rating: PG-13 ish
Word count: 3875
Summary: Fernando Torres goes missing before his transfer to Liverpool. Sergio Deals with it in his own way.
Disclaimer: Not real, If it were, none of us would be here now. :D

Comments

[golden_slumber1]

I've been lurking to see where this story would go before commenting in the previous chapters. I have to say your characters are so well-written especially for such a dark story. Nothing Sergio does seems over the top or implausible because of how you constructed him. I'm looking forward to seeing where you'll take him and Fernando, great story.

[red_robynn]

I amb so glad you think so! Your comment made me smile so much, because characterisation is something I was worried about.Thank you for commenting! I hope you enjoy the rest.

[jumping_down]

This story really freaks the fuck out of me -- whenever I read anything like this in the news, I feel the same way. But you write great and I never thought anyone would make this into a plot for a fic. Good job.

[red_robynn]

I wanted to do something a bit different with my first fic, and this came to mind, cause I have a bit of an interest in Psychology and stuff. It's mean of me to say, but I amb quite glad it freaks you out, it's not a nice topic. Hope you don't get too freaked out to enjoy the rest. Thanks for commenting!

[difusion]

Psychotic!Sergio is growing too much on me.

[red_robynn]

Me too. He's kinda a joy to write, odd as that sounds.:D

[sumrndmgrl]

he's such a jerk but has humane moments and i don't know how to feel about him lol looking forward to future parts :)

[red_robynn]

His mood changes so rapidly it's hard for even me to keep up, but it's all deliberate! I amb thinking soon peoples minds will bé made up though, if I go the way I am thinking. Thanks! :)

[ichbinichtot]

I just love the way you write, and it's like you can feel Sergio's pain as you read the story.. To the point that I almost feel sorrier for him than for Fernando.
I don't know if what he feels for Nando is love or is it an obsession, but it's tearing him apart, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm in love with this fic.

[red_robynn]

Well, we have seen very little of poor Fernando. I amb very much focusing this on Sergio's point of view, I thought about making it third person omniscient and have some of Fernando in there, but I amb liking it more closed. Maybe I will give him a chapter later on. I feel Sergio's pain too, poor baby. He suffers too. I think the line between love and obssession is definitely being blurred here too. It's a thin line anyway.

Thank you so much! I amb in love with reading your comments! They're so motivating! <3