Stockholm Syndrome - Prologue.

[red_robynn]

Name: Stockholm Syndrome - Prologue
Rating: PG-13 for now
Word Count: ~ 1500
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres
Summary: Fernando Torres goes missing just before he transfers to Liverpool. Sergio Deals with it in his own way.

Comments

[shangrilove]

OMG. This is the most intriguing start to a fic I've read. Oh wow, I absolutely love the start. I mean from Sergio's perspective, it really didn't seem like the psycho type. It's just so not like the other Sernando fics out there. It's definitely great, I would've never guessed you've never written Sernado before. I look forward to reading the next part!

[red_robynn]

Thank you for commenting, your reaction to how sergio is being is just what I had intended, so yay for that. I am looking forward to writing the next part now that I have had some positive feedback about it! It's such good inspiration. Thank you!

[dance_fairies]

Wow...just wow.
This is so good, I feel I am hooked already. When I saw the title I thought hmm it can't be Sergio can it and the way you wrote his pain at the start helped that idea. Then bam the ending! But I love it, because it's completely different from any other Sernando fic I've read.
I really hope you continue it :)

[red_robynn]

Different is what I was going for, I like different and dark, and this idea came to me after the inspirations from various sources and I was initially going to see if it worked for Roger Federer and Rafa Nadal, but it didn't seem to and then I thought, Sernando, Liverpool, perfect.

Thanks for the kind review, I will definitely continue it.

[vitaminbjorner]

Even with the title,that end just took me by suprise! It even had my heart racing! great job! I can't wait to read more!!

[red_robynn]

Thank you for commenting! I was worried the title would give away the end, and the writing of it was hard, because I didn't want it to be obvious, but couldn't write anything to contradict it, but I am glad it still took you by surprise! I hoped it would!

(I am also a big fan of your series, so that you commented has made me really happy!)

[ichbinichtot]

OMG, it's been a while since a fic has intrigued me as much as yours did.
It's just so well written and so clever (I mean, the revelation at the end of the chapter, when one was already feeling sorry for Sergio and hoping that Fernando would be found.. pure genious!).
Also, I love dark fics, especially those who deal with kidnappings and such... so it's just my cup of tea.
Please, continue it soon. I'm already loving it.

[red_robynn]

If you like dark, I don't mind saying this one most likely gets worse before it gets better. I have planned very little except knowing how I want it to end, so I hope you enjoy it!

[realluvr4]

Wow! That hit me like hard! I absolutely love it! It's very dark but you pull it off and its fantastic! Please continue this! <3

[red_robynn]

Glad you approve, and thanks for the comment. :D I will do my best to have the next part up, but I get distracted like a bitch <3