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aloneindarknes7 November 26 2011, 16:51:44 UTC
That was so incredibly hot!~ My goodness, I'm surprised I'm even capable of writing more than what is currently running through my mind, which is "OMGYEAHBABYSOHOT!"

I really loved that Liz is so bad with children and that she seemed to not believe that John could kill people with his mind. XD Hypocrite. Also, all the scars on John really lets us know that there is so much more to his past than we've been told and I can't wait to find out more about it. This story is so fantastic!

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tresmaxwell December 11 2011, 16:54:12 UTC
Sorry, I'm a little behind on my comments >_<

I'm glad you enjoyed the sex :D It ended up working really well to advance the plot surrounding John. I didn't even think about that when I was considering skipping the scene.

And I just can't imagine Liz with a kid. If she did ever end up having one, she would be a fierce mama bear, but I can't say that she would be particularly playful with the child. The idea amuses me :)

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tresmaxwell December 11 2011, 16:57:49 UTC
Sorry, I'm a little behind on my comments >_<

The knight has a lot of power and I don't think John accounted for how much O_O I hope his brain can survive another encounter with him, because they haven't killed him yet >_>

Don't worry about the old woman :D She's just a helpful and slightly perverse old lady. Originally, Abe was going to have a similar conversation with HB, but this old lady came out of nowhere and I think it made it a little less awkward. Though, it would've been funny if Abe had tried to tell him it was okay to take a super young lover.

Glad you're still enjoying it :D

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secret_smile19 November 28 2011, 19:40:33 UTC
YAAAAAY. This has made really long day sooooooooo much better. But, oh, poor John! The killing (although so much happy for powerful!John), the hospital, the scars and the secrets he's keeping...AUGH, MY CURIOSITY NEEDS THESE ANSWERS NOW. Please? :D

And, hello there, very hot but very sweet sex. *fans self*

I think I'm just going to reread this chapter again. :D

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tresmaxwell December 11 2011, 16:59:51 UTC
Sorry, I'm a little behind on my comments >_<

I'm glad I could improve your day, that makes me happy :)

Your curiosity will have to wait because the answers aren't coming yet. Soon, but not yet. Even if you ask really nicely, I think I'm going to have to keep them to myself until they make the best impact on the story. There are plans, so many plans :D

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