poem i found that i wrote a while ago

[red_head_edd]

You're not so tough now

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[cooluncleryan]

That's an awful poem.

I mean, in every way. The imagery is grotesque, there's no mind for rhythm and meter, and the thought behind it is silly and juvenile.

But, you do have Levi's 505's listed as an interest, so I can't really judge.

found you thru someone else's post

[hyruspoetry]

i like your poem actually. i wrote something you might like a while back.

Left Behind

your absence is welcome
like the mat outside my door
i want to wipe my dirty feet
directly upon your stupid face
for calling me a whore
go ahead and live your life
in denial lacking truth
i want to rip off your fucking head
and spit down your turkey neck
for being so fucking rude
keep throwing around your wasted cash
for every frivolous thing you see
i want to punch you in your gelatinous gut
and make you eat your own throw-up
for making me so fucking unhappy
you will get older
and you'll start missing me
and you'll come a knocking at my door
to find i don't live there anymore
and like the mat your fucking fat ass is standing on
you'll be left behind
replaced by something new
i'll have already thrown you out
i've forgotten all about you
and then maybe you'll get it
you are no longer welcome here

-Joti Whited